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for Underwear

by promise2003

person STARFIRE.
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY,YUMMY...MORE PLEASE...XD..
person Caitlin
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing .. Arh when's the next chapter out because it's April now oh boyy I really wanna know!!!! please post it soon :( btw this story is really really good!! Keep up the good work!:) xxxxx
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
funniest darn thing i have read in a long time. i REALLY hope it continues... i have no idea what the last update date was cuz they tot dont list it ever here... but w/e. all i know is that your story is awesome. a little angry that the sakukaka prob isnt going to happen but ill let it slide if you have some hinashino put in there, cuz i LOVE that pairing as well ^u^ *SQUEEEEEE!!!!*
person Krisa
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i reeeeeally like this story and just wanted to encourage you in your endevour. especially encourage you to CONTINUE! haha.
do they have a story/author alert on this site like they do on the regular fanfiction site. could you let me know? coz if they do it'd be worth making an account on here. (that way i dont have to pester you authors all the time for updates. well, not as often anyway.)
and if they dont have the alert thing on this site, you should really think about posting this story on the normal site as well! for me! pleeeease? :)
anyway, youre doing a great job.

Blessings,
~K
person Caslie
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Its so funny. A all around great story. Update soon~
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I'd love to read more.
Since it has been awhile I was wondering are you going to update this story? and when?
person Janelle
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Pleases pleases don't let Sakura get with Kakashi. That would be sooooo gross! I think she should get with all 3 of them ( Naruto, Sasuke and Sai. ) Just think about it. Pleases pleases write more soon!!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love It!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person Trigger
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear the twists and turns of this thrilling story are making my head spin...but in a good way ; )I can't wait for you to post the next chapter so please huury!