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for Underwear

by promise2003

person chelsea-chee
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Horray! I'm really glad you updated! Loved the last two chapters & I hope we have some Nar/Sak & Sas/Sak in there! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
person Jenn
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! i want more! but right now, all i can think about is how HOTT kakashi would look in those boxers!!! XD

sooooo....... more kakasaku coming up?? *pretty please*
person Mayab
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.

1 Lee?
2 Sasuke or Sai
3 Kakashi
4 Uh, one of the other girls? Tenten or Temari?
5 Anko or Tsunade or Shizune.
6 Ino
7 Temari
person Bookworm51485
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I really do:D Naruto making out with himself while henge'd as Sakura to distract Kakashi. That was inspired. I can't wait for your next update. I actually missed the last one so I got to read two chapters at once:) I almost feel sorry for Sakura with how much Ino's taking advantage. I swear, if she likes Kakashi so much she should forget about Sakura and make a play for him herself:D That is one pairing I've never seen, Ino and Kakashi. Anyways for the quotes, let's see if I can guess:

Lee 1. “Gai-sensei said it would be a most excellent façade.”
Naruto 2. “Geez, I guess I’ll have to take another one for the team.”
....Sai? 3. “Of course, I train every muscle in my body.”
Tsunade? 4. “I cannot believe the five of you caused a diplomatic incident! You might have seriously weakened out alliance with Sand with your stupid little club.”
..... Naruto??? Sasuke??? I have no clue 5. “Nah, it’s true, Kakashi is darn good, but Gai has always had a edge on him in that area of expertise, he’s far more perverted than the copy-nin.” (I swear that the details of this WILL NOT be written about)
Ino 6. “I think we need a mascot.”
..... Temari maybe or Kankuro. I'm guessing one of the sand siblings because they're the only one I can think of with a brother. But likely Temari since she could join the little girl underwear seeking out club 7. “He goes commando? I did not need to know that about my own brother!”
person logophobia
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet chapter, and whoever came up with the sakuraXsakura is genius.
1lee?
2naruto
3kakashi or naruto
4shizune or tsunade
5ten-ten or temari
6ten-ten
7temari
person hatakes9irl
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It totally brightens up my day whenever I see that you updated.
The perfect blend of pervertedness and humor!
:D
person Crimsonails
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squee!!!*

Omg, I love your idea for this story, so original. Props to you for making Hinata a closet pervert. I always knew she was! Your stories are all so great, keep up the good work!
person Panther Eyes
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guess thats what the boys get 4 being naughty. lol. sakura n kakashi r having dinner... will there b any "dessert"? lol.
person Porkchop
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No need to explain yourself Lemon Drops. The story is witty, funny and surprising. If you even decide that there will be absolutely no lemons because they simply will not fit in with story; I would still read it. Lemons can be of epic proportions and then there are some that really don't belong with a story or go too far over the edge. (My favorite annoyance is the get-down dirty porn sex scene that was SUPPOSED to reflect some greater feelings of true love. It can truly ruin a story.)

I loved Chapter 8. I am hoping this story goes more towards being a KakaSaku, being you established both characters as having a defined interest in one another. Whether it becomes strictly lustful or romantic is up to you as the writer. You would have my attention either way. The same goes if this story turns out to being another Sakura pairing as well.

The Quotes:
1- Rock Lee
2- Naruto
3- Rock Lee or Gai
4- Tsunade
5- Rock Lee or Ten Ten
6- Ino
7- Temari (could be Sasuke.. but that might be too far fetched)
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so freakin hilarious... i could not stop laughing keep up the good work and i hope you update soon....im kinda routin for the boys...kakashi always has all the fun....anywho update soon