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for Underwear

by promise2003

person Yuri-san
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoah, Sakura and her boys...stripping. Gaaahhh....*drool*
I've never thought Sakura was so hot -of course, it helped when Ino took control of her body. Naughty Ino! ;D And Kakashi is way too sexy for words!!! Next to him, the other boys seem...lacking in some way. Probably experience. XD
Naruto is acting like a dumbass. XD;;; (Aww. I still love you, Naruto ... now go to Gaara. XD)
Sasuke's emo hotness can not compare to the the manly hotness that is Kakashi. (I have a funny mental image of Sasuke pouting about that. ^^) Sakura completely forgot about him after she looked at Kakashi! Hee, hee, hee...
Sai... Sai I'm not sure about. (Does he have something planned? Or was there just no time to fit him into this chapter with all the Kakashi/Sakura(Ino) strip-teasing? >;D)
Oh, and I love the chapter title. ^_^ Really, "In(o) Control" is hilarious! XD
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gya ha ha ha!

Realizing your boner was caused by one of your shadow clones making out with another of your shadow clones was rather creepy. HA HA HA HA!

I just thought you should know, I'm reading this even though I can't STAND Kakashi with Sakura. Absolutely hate, and will never accept it. But that's just how funny this story is. Good stuff! I look forward to reading more.

Oh, and Ino inside Kakashi's body touching himself was awesome. I was like, "Ooooo, why can't I do that?"
person FadedPolaris
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is one of my favorite stories on here. It's light, comical, yet far from innocent. I can't wait for the future chapters. Keep up the good work.
person angelic_kitsune624
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...go Sakura! I mean...Ino! lmfao
Great chapter! *drool* Kakashi is so smxc...
lmfao Update!
person Mageblood
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story,
but I do not like ino in Sakura right now and I find it hard to believe that one of the four, especially Kakashi not noticing that Sakura behavior is different.
person Kakashi's Tenshi
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*goes down on knees* I AM NOT WORTHY I AM NOT WORTHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue with this story.. I am enjoying way to much. Hubby actually gets .... Never mind

Kakashi will totally kill the boys if he sees them taking or trying to take her.

GOD ALMIGHTY

OMFKG!!!! GO GO GO GO GO

Dont stop.

KT
PS. THinking of answering your challenge. With Tsundae and Ero-sanin.
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAI?!? Man I cannot wait for more of this story, I love it! Please update soon!
person Porkchop
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter.. well worth the wait. No need to apologize for the length of it.. you had boneheads such as myself haunting you for another chapter.

..But...

You just had to leave us hanging... Didn't you?!?! :P

I like how you wrote Ino to be Sakura's source of encouragement. I really don't think Sakura could have pulled this off all by herself... or at least without Ino's lil nudge. ;)
person kakashiluver
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Yay! Kakasaku! Wonder what the boys have up their sleeves?
person evilflynmonkeys
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was great...i really hope you will post more soon!!!