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for Underwear

by promise2003

schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you evil evil person why would you do that! I want to see how they steal her away from kakashi ( and they should he's MINE!)
--jumps out grabs a screaming kakashi and hides behind a bush
person spazz
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! the bell test!!! hahahaha....anyway i cant wait for your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
person JuPMod
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, out of fairness for all four *men*, Sakura will be *shared*. I know Sakura chosen Kakashi but she teased the other three, so they have to have her too. Of course, unless Sakura manages to trick Ino and Hinata into joining, it would be turned into a orgy. ;D
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fab absolutely fab! I loved it!! Update soon please.

-Chelsey-
AKA: HisBeautiful
person Anonymous
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this story going to be updated? I hope you finish it. I look everyday.
person supersaiyanjoy
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! What a great chapter!! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one. I loved the Kakashi and Sakura interaction in this chapter, even though Ino helped but we all knew she would have to. Keep up the good work!!
person ninjakitty
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't leave it there!!!! for the love of anime' bring out the next chapter!!!!!!!!
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! FINALLY an update!! I totally sympathize with your writers block. It took me forever to get my last story finished. Anyways, you are my hero and my enemy all at the same time. How could you stop the chapter there?? Things are getting so interesting! Well, I hope you can overcome your obstacles and updatesoon because I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww!

So close!!
damnit i want sex


but it WAS a good chapter just keep writing and the block will go away
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS AND I WANT ALL OF THE GUYS TO GET SAKURA!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!