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for Underwear

by promise2003

person angelic_kitsune624
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-Please email me when this is upadated! XD-
C'mon! When are we gonna get to the swimming part!
This is so damn good! I'm totally enjoying every chapter! lol
I wonder who she'll choose? Hmm...part of me says Sasuke, but Kakashi is a very good choice since he's experienced. lol
Anyway, UPDATE REAL SOON! X3

Kitsune-chan *_*
person anony
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww dude!!! huge cliff hanger, was so looking forward to the boys coming for a swim. But the little hinata bits were awesome :D
person krickets
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated! im so happy i have been waitng OH SO long!
person Jessica
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Devil! YOU! You are the devil! I want more! (whimpers and pouts in a corner)
person Yuri-san
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is super popular! But, then again, how could it NOT be popular! XD
Anyways...another great chapter! ^_^
Hinata is so sweet! (/and a Peeping Tom/*snicker*) Hinata + Shino = <3 !!! XD It's hard for me to think of Shino as "disgusting". I've always thought he was one of the hotter Naruto characters, ^///^ (they should show his face more often >=/ *grumbles*) and I don't have a problem with bugs (his look so clean and cute, too! XD *shot by shino*) so YAY Hinata!!! Go for it!!!!
Cupid Ino... Pfft! hahaha XD *funny mental image of Ino dressed as cupid* Awww, she has a good heart. Perverted, but good.
My favorite part of the chapter was the way she talked about how hot Kakashi was. ;D ...That, and Sai's doodling's of naked Sakura. XD Or maybe it was when Hinata said, "That is a rather stupid question" to Shino. It sounded so funny coming from her!
person Livy
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its very funny and I hope you update it soon.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want to kill you for not getting to the swimming part.
person crazy...slightly insane
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Sasuke liking Sakura...dats good thus far. But I must agree Kakashi’s sexy ass will give them all a run for their money, you too Sasuke baby...lol. But I won’t kill you since this was a nice chapter. But with every chapter I become more confused. I’m a 100% Sasu/Saku fan and there are time were I’ve read Sasu/others, but I’m stuck and that’s not supposed to happen. It’s always Sasuke and Sakura but every time I read I’m like... ‘how about Kakashi?’ Arghh this is too confusing but either one of them will be good...(.^_^.)
Congratulations on being the first to make me chose between Kakashi and Sasuke, but I’d rather keep them both....lol.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pulls cutlery out of her kitchen drawer* you my dear have got to get to the juicey part soon or I'm going to keel haul you! Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person the amber dragonfly
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I've never laughed so hard in my life except when I'm reading your stories! Bravo!! Keep it up!