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for Underwear

by promise2003

person Robyn
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have to continue this. I work at this terribly boring desk job and this story had me snickering in my cubical. I love love love it!
person Lupi81
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my new addiction! keep it coming please!!!!!
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes i would love 2 kill u 4 not getting 2 the swimming part. y... y... y... y... y... did u have 2 stop there? U EVIL LITTLE BITCH!!!!! atleast we know boys r willing 2 particapate in going "swimming" so that will b enough 2 keep me from killing u 4 now. but... if there is no swimming in the next chapter... well it ur funeral.
person Hillary (Ryokomaru)
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MOREE NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Short chapters of doom! No fair teasing the animals! D:

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
person kakashiluver
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Noo!!! I really want to see the secret weapon. Probably him without the mask, right? I hope Kakashi and her get together! ^^
person Harlequinny
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, finally, a fic for the ladies, and not only that-- It's damn good, too!

I have to admit: One, I am addicted to Underwear. I check up at least every other day, especially since the next chapter certainly seems so ... promising. Two, I am now addicted to the idea of men in underwear. Boxers, briefs, boxer-briefs, speedos, 'banana-hammocks', it's all running through my mind day in and day out.

If I didn't like it so much, I might even be a little peeved at you for planting all of those deliciously dirty thoughts. Can't wait for the next installation.

Mmm.... Underwear.

person Yuri-san
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Run for your lives, boys!!!(so that Hinata can peep at your retreating rear-ends XP)
Fun chapter. Short, though-- but it was so full of scheeming!Ino that I didn't care. (Ino is evil XD If I were a guy, I would be scared of her. lol)
person lovelesslover
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao omg that was great, I can't wait for the next chapter, she must spy on Gaara and Neji too!! SPY XD!
person goddessofflame
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, yes you were right, you need to be maimed. but i guess a cliffy makes the next chapter all the sweeter. can't wait until you update.