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for Underwear

by promise2003

person angelic_kitsune624
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Perverts unite! lol
Awesome chapter! -sorry for not reviewing the other one- lol Haha! GO INO! lol
Loved it! UPDATE REAL SOON!

Kitsune-chan *_*
person NeeN
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLLLLLLEAAASSSSEEE UUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We need KakaSaku goodness. Let the boys suddenly suffer from a severe case of underwearitis... It would be awesome for Sakura to just give Kakashi a private viewing.

Great chapter btw.. keep up the great work. Just make sure Sakura gets Kakashi in bed at least once.. or else the rabid KakaSaku fangirls will have to issue the Leaf Village Secret Finger Jutsu: A Thousand Years of Death! :Þ
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good god you're evil!! I'm dying to know what happens.....Update soon! Those boys are going to ham it up for Sakura for sure.....*inner squee for the Kakashi/Sakura* Keep up the good work!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person hplotrnerd@yahoo.com
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are killingme, but I have to admit it is a teaser before the swim and it does add very interesting indeed! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person chelsea-chee
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HORRAY! I'm glad you updated! I really loved this chapter, though now, I can't wait until the swim! I wonder what the guys will do to help Sakura out with her "problem"? hehe! Anyway, please try to update soon! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
person Livy
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a greath story, I really hope you update soon.
person morwen re
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg... i wanted to bust out laughing at hinata's reaction! i love this fic! it rock! you've done a good job keeping everyone in character for the most part and i love the plot line... totally brilliant and needed to break up the monotone plots...
person hatakes9irl
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a very funny story.
very sexy to think about...
:D
person Jenn
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! sooo... more kakasaku? *big bubbley eyes* i LOVE that pairing! >_< and now thanks to this story, i'm day dreaming about hot shinobi in their underwear! XD not that it's a bad thing.... ~...~