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for Underwear

by promise2003

person Lanier
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I cant wait to see how this goes. Ino is so evil, but so good.
person Rina
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have to update soon! I love this story!!!!
person anony
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LoL omg i cant believe you made ino tell teh guys about poor sakura XD guh if only she knew.
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT! DAMMIT! DAMMIT! i was hoping 2 read the swimming part in this chapter. but u probably knew that n wanted us 2 continue reading by building up the anticapation(sp?). ur good. but now that the boys know whats going on from ino-pig ( i swear i'll kill her 4 that) things should get interesting. hurry n update... please.:D
person Only Secret
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've made my day! Most definitely too! *wheeee~ gets hyper over the thought!* So is there going to be any pairings? I mean I've seen hints of KakaSaku....but I wouldn't mind SasuSaku either...Anyways Update soon, please!
person Kakashi's Tenshi
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT TO YOU MEAN BY STOPING THERE!!!

US GIRLS NEED A RELEASE!!!


Kakashi and Sakura or maybe More.. *groans and inner self faints*
OOOHH... Make her Dream CUM true... ALL OF THEM.. though keep Kakashi for MOST.. and get rid of that mask *sighs*
person chelsea-chee
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Horray for you! Sexy men in their underwear! Ooh! Finaaly, a fic for us ladies! hehe! Anyway, hmm... if I had to choose, it would probably Naruto to go with Sakura. Or maybe Sasuke? Either way, two, no, four sexy guys in their boxer-briefs. Yeeeeeaaaaaaah. A girl's dream come true I bet! hehe! Anyway, loved the whole swimming thing & can't until Sakura swims with the group. Ooh! Its gonna get good. Really good. Anyway, hope you update soon! Love it! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
person NeeN
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PPLLLLEAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEE UUUPPPDDAATTEEE SOONNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Monkey Lady
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait, I can't wait!!! Next chapter please! Make her swim with all of them and she has to sleep with at least Kakashi, because let's face it, it's KAKASHI! Of course I'd never be so forward as to tell you how to write your own fic.... Can't wait to see the next chapter. :) Lovely work as usual. Very funny and witty.
person Jenn
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh! kakashi in his boxers is just too DAMN SEXY!!! XD and something between him and sakura wouldn't be so bad either.. ;]