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for Underwear

by promise2003

person Yuri-san
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Both" sounds enticing, but... I'm leaning towards "group". XD
Oh! Or: Sakura tells Ino what Kakashi said (blackmailed) and then Ino (michevious/perverted vixen that she is) takes over Sakura's body and -swimming with the group- does... stuff... ecchi stuff. XD;;; (Oh dear, my perverted mind is running away with me... again. ;P)
This fic is so much fun!
Happy New Year's Eve! ^_^
person Yuri-san
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! All the girls in together, like a club! That would be so... XD. Just XD.
I can't wait to see what you do with Hinata. *laughs at mental image of closet-pervert Hinata*
person DK
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, this story is just too funny and cute, I love it, can't wait to read more and see who she ends up with in the end ;)
person Smuxelicious
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE!
person NeeN
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!! omg now I have a closet pervert Hinata in my head lolll and you should soo totally do the group!!!!!!
oh yeah HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!1
person J-Pop Princess
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! This story makes me laugh...an makes me fantasize about Team 7 in their underwear like mad. I think I am a closet pervert too! I really want Sakura to end up in both situations and it would be even funnier if it was against her will and I REALLY want her to end up between the sheets with Kakashi because you know he's going to rock her world no matter what underwear he's wearing. Great job on this story. Update soon! I can't wait to see the outcome.
person Sukia
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!! so good, please...keep up the sumt!! (although i support the sasusaku ship, i may let this slide cuz its so so so good!)
person sileath
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Sakura is a bit too proud to give a private viewing. If she gave a public viewing she could shake it off as being only natural. She could give the argument that eventually on a mission one of the guys would have seen her and it'd be better if they did it now to lessen embarrassment so that a mission won't be compromised on account of bashfulness, or awkward feelings.
person NeeN
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please Please Please make it SakuraxSasuke pleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!!!!
person NeeN
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sakura and the group, and I love it!!!!!!!!!! and totally halarious, can't wait til next chapter!