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for Underwear

by promise2003

schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i totally digged that last chapter, seriously awesome! i loved that everyone realized that lee's not such a creep and that sakura admits having feelings for naruto- but wasn't it going to be a harem x sakura style? isn't she going to be with all of team 7 in the end, please make it so!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you, my best friend just recently introduced me to the wonders of fanfiction, and I am now a bit obsessed. I read this story last night and you have to be the best writer on this site. I can't wait for the next update. Thank-you!!!!!
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, I swear I am falling in love more and more with Naruto and sakura pairing. Forget Kakashi makes this a naruto sakura story. Oh so sweet, I swear tears came to my eyes. Can't wait for the next chappie, Jo.
person MrsCake
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, heh. I knew there was an Adonis hiding under that god-awful suit! Leave it to Ino to uncover that hot bod. The Naru/Saku moment was absolutely heartbreaking. Loved it!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAY!!!! Naruto!!! I knew you could do it!!! hehe, I love Naruto x Sakura, tehe.
N, Lee has a Sexy Body!? Of course there's no doubt! ;p
XD
person anika
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love naruto x sakura. i was kinda off wondering when/if you were going to have serious naruto come out. and to make sakura realize her love for loveable guy, you should have one of the girls start 'flirting' with him.

love ino's view on how naruto the type of guy you fall in love with.

this is just a suggestion but i was thinking that maybe in the near future, you should have tsundae give naruto a solo mission, you know one that suppose to be a very simple one but turns into a s-class, and he ends up missing for like three months that not even jiriaya or the toads can find him?

don't know why but i really like it when my favorites get seriously hurt!

hey what about ayami from the ramen stand join in on the fun also? and hanabi, she is around moegi's age isn't she?
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DEAR GOD HELP ME!!!!!!!!! I need more!!! and will anyone make a fan-artbook of this fic!!!! I have gotta see the new Rock Lee Now!!!!!! Please update for the love of Boxers( My Fave )!!!!!!!
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i always knew lee was hiding a god-like body under his clothes. **giggle** this makes me wonder if lee n ino will hook up? if not can i have him... lee has always been my favorite naruto character. from last chapter i was thinking about having naruto n gaara hooking up but after reading this chapter i kinda want sakura 2 fall in love w/ him. sakura always strikes me as a girl who wants a committed relationship(not exactly being marriage) b4 sleeping w/ some1. i know she will find that w/ naruto but could she get that from kakashi... i know he cares deeply 4 sakura but does he want 2 make a committment w/ her? as for the other guys... sasuke is not worthy of sakura... sai still needs 2 work on his emotions (n that will be a long time from now)... gaara well i think they make a cute couple but so far it seems like a physical attraction.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I don't wanna wait until the 25th for the next chapter.

This story is very addictive and I really want to know what happens next. I also really want to see a picture in my head of a studly Lee because I can't picture it.
person A.J.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome! I love how they finally found out how hot Lee is under that jumpsuit!! I always suspected that with all his training he would be a marvel to look at. I can't wait for the next chapter!