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for Surprise Tactics

by midii

person Marcella
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god baby,dont do that to my I completely fall in love with your story!!! :'( desperately need next chapter!
person Sage
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Asuma so cheated! But I like it hope you write more
person Jessica
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a cheap shot, Asuma!...hmmm, but, oh so delectable! I'd gladly lose if that were to happen as my 'penalty'! Very cute! ^-^
person Ems
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reminds me of a fanart I saw once... Nice. ^^ If you -do- decide to continue this, I'll be watching for it.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Now that's just not right...
person lo
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
huh...uh interesting, not sure what to make of it. But, it was very entertaining.