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for My Chains and my Master

by Kurotsuki

person Naru
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OroNaru:
person aria
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, it seems to have a lot of potential.
i'm looking forward to next. please update soon~
(i vote for SasuNaru!!)
person DrakenD4
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LUV this fic, and even though I am a total ItaNaruSasu fanatic I'm gonna vote for OroNaru
cause this pairing is like totally new and interesting.
person alizabe
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i really liked the first chapter. if you are still taking votes for the pairings i like sasunaru better than itanaru. just my opinion. can't wait for the next update.
bye
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ItaNaru, Itachi's so much hotter than Sasuke
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I guess Sasuke won the vote on ff.net. Personally I would have preferred ItaNaru, SasuNaru is waaaaay to prevalent. We need some variety in our world not the same thing over and over and over and over and over and over again. But oh well, I don't hate SasuNaru, it's just getting a bit too common.

I liked your first chapter, the beginning definitely interested me in the story. I hope that in the next chapter you'll give a bit of info on what Naruto's been doing with Orochimaru all these years. I mean I'm sure we all have a clue and can imagine but yea. Also I would love to get some background on Sasuke. I've read several different versions of his family situation and I'm curious what your going to write it as. Also Itachi, is he going to be in this? I'm kind of hoping that maybe you'll reconsider the vote, maybe do it again here if Itachi lost. I mean it would probably turn out the same way, people here are pretty SasuNaru crazy but it really would be nice to see something different for a change. Anyways, I find myself wondering what's going to happen when Naruto gets involved with someone other than Orochimaru, and likely without his permission (unless of course he decides to encourage it for some sick reason). Hmmm.... I can't wait until your next update.
person Amber
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great first chapter! Update soon...^-^
person trabeck
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^
person Nami D.J.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far ^_^! I really wouldn't mind the OrochiNaru pairing if there was also a SasuNaru pairing on the side as well. But even if there wasn't one I'll still give this story a shot, because if there wasn't a SasuNaru pairing the story still has the potential to be really good. I look forward to your update, keep it up =D!
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well cool, if the votes still on then I definitely want to add mine for Itachi:D