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Um. Well. Yeah, wow. Do I REALLY want you to continue? Nah, not me. I've never liked lemon, especially not with Itachi and Naruto involved... YES CONTINUE GODDAMNIT! Gah! You have to. Have. to. Oh god, I really love when Naruto's depressed like that.. and seriously, that was like the most wonderful version of Itachi I think you've ever written. Of course all of them are better than anyone else's, but I think this one might be your.. well, not most true to his real character, but most wonderful XD Gawd. I love it. And if you do make this into a fic (which you better!), could you like.. make a mailinglist or something? :D And if you could, perhaps then sign me up? :D:D:D fufufu.. And oh, by the way. I've posted my first chapter of that crossover-fic I said I wasn't going to post yet :p XD And as I said, I understand if you don't want to spoil the game and read it, but elsewise it would mean the world if you read it and gave me your thoughts about it. Really!
Anyway, I hope it won't be too long until you update CV & WR again, 'cause I'm really looking forward to see what'll happen in both of them. :D
-Shizu

..A collection of lemons...with plot? GOD yes!! That would make my day.

I always love whatever you write. I hope to see some updates (any update) soon.

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I absolutly adored this story. It seemed to wrap me up and take me away. It was passion filled and agonizingly wonderful. You are very talented. Keep writing.

You always amaze me with your writing style. Hah! Count me as a total fangirl. I'm really impressed with this one for two reasons. The first one being that the way you handled the tenses and all of your tools of description really made the fiction vivid, not to mention the fact that I appreciated that you didn't make Jiraiya into a douche bag like a lot of writers do. -loves Jiraiya- Second, the pairing is just really hot and unusual, and I couldn't resist it. I can't wait to see more fics from you, my dear!!

Update soon.

This was delicious, beautifully written. I would like to see another chapter please? Kudos!

Wah, that was great, you have got to continue! The only thing I didn't like was the portrayal of Jiraiya, but that's just because I'm a Jiraiya fan. I loved the Naruto Itachi interaction, write more!

YES YES you have to continue. Please, *fall on knees ans begs*
This story is goode i would really like to read more of it

I would very much like to see you continue this, be it as a continuing story or a collection of snapshots, insights, smut - I'd enjoy seeing where you take this.

I don't like one-shots because you never get to see what happened after. So, obviously, I want you to continue.
I also don't much like reading lemons – they get boring – but I've enjoyed your other lemony work, and I'm sure I can stomach more sex, in return for plot. There are some sacrifices, one just has to make. *Sniff/Wink*