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Who's giving you a hard time, eh?! I'll beat em' up!!! Your story is plenty good!!!! I like how it's in Sasuke POV!! Sasuke trys so hard to convince himself that he doesn't care that he hasn't recieved a reply yet......poor Sasuke.. Anyway I love you story and anyone who bashes on it is jealous of your awsome skillz!!! Update soon!!!!

-Jason

They bashed this story?! -Gets out grey hounds and perpatrator's socks- Go get'em boys! -Lets Greyhouds loose-

I wuv this story so very much -glomps and huggles story-, and you're right, you shouldn't take what they say to heart, because there's a lot of moronic people that go on this part of the site just to bash us yaoi writers, and you need to ignore them. I hope that you don't stop trying on this story, and if ever you feel the need to rant, send me an e-mail and I'll listen -is good at listening-.

fireprincess59@yahoo.com

I like it, I think it's pretty funky in a kool way :D
I agree with you about aff.net It does have downfalls, I made an account once but then I deleted it because people kept on getting nasty. You have loads of talent though, keep it up :).

WOOO GO YOU!personally i think its good to be creative while your writing instead of sticking to guidelines all the time and i like this fanfic because its different keep being unique and i appreciate the time and effort you put into this x

You have to learn to ignore flamers even if they piss you off. Delete their message and focus on the people that enjoy your stories. As for your story, I like it. If you need help with doing it thrid person I would be honored to help you (I think I got the hang of it by now), and once figure out how you want it to flow it comes easily. The trick is (for me anyway) is to write bits and pieces, and then go back and read them, and then "answer" questions that you think the readers would be asking while reading it. I don't know, just a suggestion. So don't worry about that person, just keep writing because it's something that you enjoy.

Man write what you want don't let others stop you. Their are others who really love your story. Go ahead write what you have too people can kiss @$$ who flame this. Its kinda cute!

hey, so far i think its pretty good!

Aww thank you hon, I was overjoyed that I inspired you to wite this. It's a good start too! I want to read more. "Go Get Em' Tiger" is great isn't it?! I love Danii the Muse, she's my seme! I hope you continue to write! TTYL

~animehead

That was too cute! ^.^ I'm honored to be mentioned, but animehead is just fucking awesome. (Yes, I see you... not very nice for my uke to be on top of me... XD)

Great job and I DO want to know what gave Sasuke a nosebleed... MY Naruto better not have been COMPLETELY naked. He might catch a cold. =(

Good job, hun!

Uhhh....do you know how to spell, cuz you put Uchia and I think a lot of Sasuke fans would get upset because it's Uchiha, you for got the other H, besides that your way of writing is really fucked up, i know you're trying to do third person, but it just isn't making any fucking sense....