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Zomg. *sniffles* THAT WAS SO SWEET!(Sucker for sappy parts) Especially Sasuke's email.

NARUTO! *Angry mode* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS? You cheated on Sasuke! T_________________T

i..don't know how to react to that chapter. He knows that naru-chan and foxy are the same right..so did he write that email knowing it was naruto or no... Ack confused!!!

Ahhh!! This is really a cute story, but ;_; you totally broke my heart when Naruto slept with Sai - With Sai :( ;_; Ooh! Sad. but I'm really happy about the next chapter. Sasuke finally admitted it XD, and to Naruto no less. But the poor baby(Naru-chan) is gonna feel like shit isn't he? Oh well. I'm really hoping all's well that end's well, cause I'm NaruSasu all the baby XD. Keep up the good work love, until next time, Ja.

yes, I am a WHORE. (hey can you really BLAME me for wanting that chapter longer? i like dem lemons). of course i understand you wanting to be lazy. shoot, i'm the KING of procrastination (yes i say king, it just sounds more authoritative than queen). hence my screenname i suppose. ^^ o but this last chapter was also sad. from reading the beginning chapters, i didnt really expect there to be angst. but its coming in thick and heavy. good thing i love it. and god your review responses are so awesome. i'd leave a page of a review if i could. lol.

greatness? ::glances over both shoulders:: me? ptf. haha. right... i ought to finish that thing. you're such a doll though. ;-) i promise you (before i die) i WILL draw you some fanart. yes. and i say this now so you can freaking hold me to my damn word. just dont expect it soon. haha. im a busy, busy bitch. now off to do my homework. lol. ^^ update now, dammmit! and make with a happy ending or blood will be spilt! (my own from slitting my wrists). JUST KIDDING. :-P so make it so! i like angst with happy endings. hehe. ttyl.

Wow.

Next chapter, please.

Hurry update i was in tears at the end I have to read more

Funny, a lot of my friends say I frighten them too. Don't see why...=^___^=

YAY! Sasu-chan is finally re-earning his merits! Woot! You apologized, Sasuke! I'm so proud of you!

Now both you and Naruto say sorry, kiss, make up, make out, and fuck each other senseless while I stand here with my camera ^_________________^

Oh, I see. Well, the grammer's not too big of a deal. Your unique style overshadows it ^^^

ZOMG! TIS THE MUTANT THREE-EYED SMILEY COME TO HAUNT US!!!

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-stares-

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-backs away-

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O___o

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-Pokes-

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-Runs away squeeling like a Sasuke fangirl...wait...I am a fangirl... XP-

LOVE YOU AND UPDATE [S][O][O][N][E][R][!]

~Lihrah

WOW Sasuke apologized. That was nice. Awwwww. It was good. I don't really have much to say. You know me. I pictured Sasuke running and laughed even though I wasn't supposed to. Haha. He's a nerd. I can't help it. Good work. Take care.

'HAHAHAHA I'm glads your not overly upset with the angst cause you will be seeing some good action!! '

ooooooooooooh that made me so dman happy!!! :D hehehe but anyway about this chapter *clears throat* O_O Sasuke attacked Sai? Naruto slapped Sasuke?.... *sigh* I guess I'd be hurt too, it comes with the feelings ne? But at least teme sent an apology, but I'm wondering if hell take long to forgive Naruto even though TECNHICALLY Naruto didn't do anything wrong because they aren't together... but there's that whole he belongs to me thing *sigh* yeah complicated :s HOWEVEr I trust you :D and despite the way things are that was still a great chapter :d heh teme apologising, honestly that's not something you see very often :D I'll enjoy the novelty ^_^

Can't wait to see how Sasuke's 'sorry' e-mail goes down with Naruto ^_6

Thanks for the update
Hina xXxx