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you can't do that. it is so short. that is not enough to last as long as you make me wait. i want more more more. please update soon. thank yous.

i swear to god when is sasuke gonna realize he is talking to his idiotic blond dobe? -starts smacking her head against the desk- at least he apologized now the rest is up to naruto. -sighs- that'a what happens when two of the most stubborn chars in the whole wide world falls for each other. -shakes her head- anywho don't worry i called the hounds off of u by giving them tapes of naruto doing strip teases for them and as u can see....my room is a mess. -turns around to yell at the group currently jacking off- you better clean it all off too!!! if u have to go as far as using orochimaru's tongue to do it then do!! -turns around again- see? not a pretty sight at all.

I like the way you write this fic!!!!
Love it!!! please , update soon!

Oh I did Sama! I really did...I mean I was all like poor Sasuke he knows now...but the fact he beat Sai ass was kinda hot hehe...but he ran away...wow...never thought Sasuke would run away...poor lil lamb! I hope Naruto is up next and talks about the letter...but he's gonna feel even shitter when he finds out Sasuke does like him and he did what he did...damn drama! I LOVE IT!

OMG, I almost died waiting for this update! XD
This chapter was really, really good and I can't believe that you ended it there like that! I want Naruto to get the e-mail and read it!!!!! -faints-
Please, please, please, try and update soon!
This story is so awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^

Wow, I've read a lot of lemons in my day... and this has to be one of the top ten. I love it so much because it's RAW. All the emotions are right there out in the open, and it makes the chapter so beautiful (yet tragic) at the same time.

All I can say about this chapter is that I loved it!!!!! Happiness and sorrow coupled at it's best; I can't wait to read the next installment! Please update soon. XD

one: mesa's a girly otherwise i wouldn't be able to get all these goregous guys to pose for me! ^_^ second: i can't believe naruto did that!!! -sighs- damn misunderstandings...... and poor sai...well at least he got some tanned ass. -looks behind her and sees sai flaunting around that he got a go at naruto who is pouting in the corner going on bout his sore butt- eh heh...u might want to run now. -feels the auras of evilness and revenge coming on her- very fast as in across the border fast.

Oh....my...god...AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH WHY!!! WHY!!!! why would you allow that to happen!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO Naru-chan!!!! Damn you Sai looking like Sasuke and confusing my poor naru-chan!!! *sniff, sniff* It gets better though right?! *gives you watery puppy eyes*

T.T oh why do i always have to be right. it's such a burden. ::shakes head woefully:: ooooo naruto how could you!! i guess just holding plushie couldn't cut it anymore. but dear me, oh my. when i first read the chapter title, i was like, hmmm "i wonder..." From my experience (my poor, poor, still-needs-to-be-finished-fic and novice writing experience :-/) i know that detail is the key to a good lemon. Since your writing style is mininimalistic (kinda ernest hemmingway, gertrude stein, albert camus-ish, ne ne?), I was curious as to how you'd actually do the lemon. but IT WORKS! Haazaa ^^ i think what kept the lemon juicy was the flow and the choice of key words. i only wish it were longer to compensate for the lack of "flowery" description, but i don't suppose that'd REALLY be necessary. (it could be just the greedy whore in me). it was still hot, and the point gets across. cool cool. but 'cha know. it's ironic, that the comfort sex justs leads to more conflict. what's our poor 'lil naruto to do?? o____0

...wow okay this whole chapter made me think of Grey's Anatomy. When she slept with that one guy and started crying right after. Awww it was so sad, and how can Naruto say he cheated on Sasuke...and how can he think Sasuke didn't want him? He didn't want some stranger from an online chat. He didn't know it was Naruto. So Naruto is just all sad about nothing...poor Sai, he had cheer up sex! Though....I still loved it!