rate_review Reviews

I have a question if you didn`t like how the last one went why the hell don`t you write this stupid story and you say you hate Sasuke I say you lie I wouldn`t doubt you love Sasuke you sre enough like him in this story to have that bastard rape one of the of hottest females on the show and you also want her to call him master and you say you hate him your full of it hell why not have him rape Sakura or if you actually do hate him why don`t you have Sasuke be the one who get raped by some guy but you didn`t so I say your just another Sasuke lover who thinks he is a GOD

LOL who says everybody respected this story because I sure didn`t sorry I didn`t like it hellI will never like it since you want everybody to think Sasuke is a god and what he does everybody has to follow or kiss his ass so but I really like Tenten she is one of my favorite female ninjas and have to be raped by that asshole known as Sasuke sorry again I just hate him witha passion and you want her to lose her will and call him master there you go proving me right when I said ppl think Sasuke is a god heck I wouldn`t care less if it was Sakura then Tenten oh well like I said I don`t respect this story the only thing I like was when who ever took over had Tenten kill Sasuke now that I loved it mainly when Sasuke is dead but that is me and my opinion and I don`t care what ppl think of it

Anti-tryst

Please don't lose heart over this very annoying problem you're having. You had a solid idea (although I'm personally squicked by non-consent I can see where this story could have developed into something). I'm sorry that somebody clearly under-aged has chosen to amuse themselves at your expense. I guess that's a lesson to us all to have "add chapters" be by invite only.

WooooHoooo lets bow down to the almighty GOD Sasuke wow they should have never called the anime Naruto since Sasuke is a god and almighty they should have called the anime Sasuke the powerful sorry I just cann`t help myself when I am proved right that everybody thinks Sasuke is a GOD no wondering I cnn`t stand Sasuke since he thinks he is better than everybody and only cares about himself and he is also a weak since he turns on everybody and goes to the bad guy just so he can be strong oh well I am sorry again for the review because I like Naruto well not in that way since it looks like nobody else does

LOL I loved the chapter where gets attacked by a monkey and then gets killed by Tenten the hotty I like Tenten I hate Sasuke heck I would love to see a story where Tenten is paired up with Naruto and it isn`t a rape story since it is very very rare to find a story with that pairing

I would love to see this go on because I would love to see somebody come in and see what the asshole is about to do and BRUTELLY KILLS Sasuke then brings him back and do it all over again all because I cann`t stand when ppl think Sasuke is better than everybody if that is so they wouldn`t call the anime NARUTO it would be called SASUKE not naruto god I hate Sasuke I just wish pplwould write where Naruto gets all the girls oh well sorry if you hate ths review its just my opinion

Anti-Tryst, personaly im not a sasuke fan, but i am a tenten fan. and it is because of tenten that im going to adapt this story to fit as a peice of one im writing. granted some of it will change, but in the end your wish for the defloweration of tenten will happen. but, alas, i wont be writing a chapter for this story. figured itd be polite to let ya know, even though youdid give every one free reign with this story.

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please keep this up. like it so far but want to get to the lemony goodness

D: It's too short!! please add more to it! I may hate Sasuke but I'm starting to ike SasukexTenten

I agree because I can't stand Sasuke. But this plot bunny just wouldn't leave me be.