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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey...nice beginning....love to see what you've come up with next! e-mail me when the next chapters up!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
arg that was such a cliffy...........I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! please!
it couldnt be sasuke and narutos son......is it narutos an itachis son.. *GASP*
it couldnt be sasuke and narutos son......is it narutos an itachis son.. *GASP*
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF? Naruto left with Itachi? The boy has no brains. Good start. More, onegai.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! XD Naruto had man-babies with Itachi?! SHOCKING! Though, how's Naruto going to act when his baby is gone? ;o; And what will happen when the kid wakes up? STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF CAUGHT IN THE FRAY! XDXDXD Okay, so that was a bit cheesy but I got like two hours of sleep. It's allowed. And I hope you update this story soon! It's really good!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's up with that kid? Is this a mpreg? How awesome! Write on write on. I hate cliffhangers
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say that you caught my attention right off the bat with this one. Naruto and Itachi's son, perhaps? I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, could you continue this, before the angst will threaten to vlow me up! This is really good!!!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/715864/
that is a link to an Author named lightsoul. I really hope you are lightsoul, if you aren't then you are plagerizing this person's work.
that is a link to an Author named lightsoul. I really hope you are lightsoul, if you aren't then you are plagerizing this person's work.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute. I like it. I hope its Ita/Naru. I love that pairing, but there just arent that many out there. But Sasu/Naru will do just as well.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it is a little sjort but kool