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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OI! GENKAI DESU KA?!?
Well Mr. I love Uchiha Sasuke...LOL....this was definetly a great chapter though it took me months to read it.
Sasuke ROCKs in you story, though you know i don't really care for him...he's okay i guess
but if i may give some advice...
when you have more than one person talking...you should change paragraphs cause most people won't understand who is talking....
like me...aside from me not knowing who's talking most of the time...your stroy is awesome...says me...
Well Mr. I love Uchiha Sasuke...LOL....this was definetly a great chapter though it took me months to read it.
Sasuke ROCKs in you story, though you know i don't really care for him...he's okay i guess
but if i may give some advice...
when you have more than one person talking...you should change paragraphs cause most people won't understand who is talking....
like me...aside from me not knowing who's talking most of the time...your stroy is awesome...says me...
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it, please more sasusaku! and update soon!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good work as always...this chapter was pretty good update soon
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update asap
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its interesting so far i hope you update soon i would like to see what you got planned for the rest of this fic
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this....honestly it was good...nice useage of vocabulary....
can't wait for the next chapter...
BRING ON SAKURA!
can't wait for the next chapter...
BRING ON SAKURA!