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I liked it. =]

Neji's a freak though!! He can be really scary sometimes...

Poor Sasuke, well at least he knows Naruto's pregnant now. I hope Sasuke finds him before he has the baby.
Good-luck Sasuke!!

I can't wait to see an update. <3

Andi-chan

Please continue.

it all depends if you are going to write about after the baby is born then your dng fine but if your going to stop right after naruto has the baby then that last chapter probably could have been two and you shouldn.t have put the neji thing for a couple mor chapters like one or two. keep up the good work the plot is great i really want to read more! (when your done with this would you consider doing an irukaka mpreg? just wondering cause there so few of those out there, theres like three all together)keep writing!^_^

GREAT STORY!! Well since you asked: I kinda like the character of Neji and can't quite picture him in a rape-scene. Please don't make him bad! ( Although you'd still have me hooked if he did turn out bad) ;-)
Pleaze write more!

I have no complaints, I thought it was good but if you feel that you need to re-write it's okay. But just to you know - let you know that I thought it was good the way it was.

Ja ^_^
Hina xXxx

i think the story is going well, for me i dont like story that drag on, story that get the point is much more interesting in my case. so yea the story is good the way it is.

PS i cant wait for next chapter. thank you!

I found chapter 3 okay. You don't have to rewrite it. Hope to see your next update soon. ^^

Personally I'd say yes, but that's part of my personal preference. I like SasuNaru stories (though they are being way overdone), but I hate it when it seems like the authors putting down the usual competition (Neji or Gaara) in order to build up Sasuke. And there have been a lot who've done it. I just don't really buy Neji raping Naruto, he's an conceited ass (which is something Sasuke is as well) but he's not a bad person. That would be the main thing I'd change. Jealous Neji, Neji wanting Naruto okay. But basically Evil Neji I can't say I love.

Btw do you not want to accept anonymous reviews. The mods have made a change to the new 'you must be signed in rule' to allow the author's to chose whether they want to accept anonymous reviews.

Yes, I would -- at least certain parts. I agree with the previous reviewer that Neji wouldn't have raped Naruto. He might try to make Sasuke look bad to win Naruto over, but he wouldn't hurt him. Neji is from a prominent family and behaves with class and dignity, as a general rule. To think that he would attack and rape the one he loves is hard to accept. It's not in his character. Sakura is OOC as well. I can see her making a complete pest of herself, but I don't buy her going into slut-mode that way. It's up to you, of course. I think I'd enjoy the fic more if everyone was in character, but I'll keep reading, whatever you decide.

i really like the chapter all but the crazy Neji

sasuke should find out it was neji who raped naruto and beat the crap out of him then cut off his dick leaving him to bleed to death a incompleate man haha

and sasuke should find naruto before he gives birth

i like the chapther