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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nope it was good!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"No." I like it just fine!! Plus I'm anxious to read what happens next!!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its not necessary to rewrite the chapters but could u please fix the places where u have written since when it should have been sense, it really bugs me for some reason..
I like the story, its cute, and I hope Sasuke will beat the shit out of Neji when he finds out what happened ^^
Keep it up
I like the story, its cute, and I hope Sasuke will beat the shit out of Neji when he finds out what happened ^^
Keep it up
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it I don't think you should rewrite it it looks fine and very well written to me. But if you feel the need to rewrite/add something is fine too. BTW! I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got a great start here and I look forward to reading more. It would have been nice to have more build-up to the relationship, but what you've got is good. nice writing!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so it was neji that raped naruto! how dare he!! i'd like to see him get what's coming to him for once even tho he's really hot and naruto obsessed....damn it y'd he have to turn like that! -starts banging her head against her desk-
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you made neji evil!! not that i care, but OMG!! that's just something that has never... i mean... whoa. but i like this story, keep it up. ^.^
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*previously your gay stalker lol!* WOW!!!! NEIJI raped naruto!!!!! NOOOO KILL THE BASTARD!! *whew* ok i'm done! but i love the story.
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story! Can't wait til an undate. If it isn't too much trouble could you email me when you've put up a new chapter. I rarely have the chance to come on the site as much as I used to and I'd hate to miss out on a good story!
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-laughing her ass off- ya know? if kakashi knew what sasuke and naruto were doing, what was he doing wondering around the hill in the first place?? -arches brow- btw love the story!