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for Secret Love

by yaoigurl06

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay. i really like this story. i mean, the plot is really good and sakura is SUCH a bitch. but, this story is kinda hard to read, love. there are many mistakes that makes it confusing... if u want i could beta it...unless u already have a beta, that is...

other than the few grammar and spelling mistakes its a good story..more than good really
please update soon

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
person LadyWolf
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated dated this! this is one of my favorites..

I swear to all that is holy...I can't STAND that pink haired BITCH!!!! I hope She get's what
she deserves!!!!

Post soon!
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness you updated. i can't wait for the next chapter.
person Chibi
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really great job on this story, I can't wait for a new chapter.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh pleeeassse continute this story!!!! i can't wait for that bitch Sakura to get what's coming to her!!!
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh YAY!!! your baaack!! *glomps* I'm happy!!! ^^ I'm one of your fans btw.. I LOVE this fic and ive had it in my faves for AGES! I can't wait till you update!! ^^ wiieee!!
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and re-read thins. Sakura and Neji are two sick people hands down! a i believe Neji father Sakura's baby. if that baby is born with pale eyes, she's screwed over and please tell me there's no Uchiha DNA being stored in the ninja hospitals or sperm banks but i doubt that would be possible since the Uchiha clan was slaughtered. But i believe Sai will get to the bottom of this at frst i thought it would be Sai's baby because of the resentment Sakura gave when "HE CHOSE TO WATCH OVER NARTUO AND NOT HER?!!!" what does that mean? but i believe in you and that this sick plan of hers and neji's will blow in their face. and besides Hinata deserves better come on i mean being engaged to your own first cousin ugh!
person Ikippiki
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! Even if I wish there was a little more smex in it and less Sakura bashing...
You are going to update right? Or did you drop this story? That would be a waste it's a really good one!
person angel
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i need another chapter plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
person Freya
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....where is the new chappie....????????????????