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Just found this fic and all I can say is that I totally love it. When I came to the end I coudn't belive there wasn't any more. I want to know if Naruto and his child will be okey and who Sakura tricked into getting her pregnant. Hope to see more of this and I also want to say thank you for a very well written story that you easily get hooked on =)

that story is awsome please update soon

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON.

nice premis but characters, especially Sasuke is SO OOC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW!!!! DARE!!!!! THEY!!!! DO!!!! THAT!!!!! SAUKEBETTERKILLTHEFREACKINCOUNCIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOWDARETHEYAJ'FIPASEURJF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*SPLODE* okay........... now that i have that out of my system........... I love the story so far. At first I thought that you were going to make Tsunade evil or something because it sounded like she didn't like Naruto!!!!!(That was a really scary thought!!!!) Bbut it turned out okay.... I definitly can't wait until Sasuke starts to figure out who set all this up!!!(bloodlust hehe *evil grin*) O and Gaara of course, can't forget about the Sand Coffin!!!!! Okay anyway, love the story and can't wait for more!!!!!!

Aww, the ending was cute. I just have one question, Do you like to Sakura bash? Or Neji bash? Please update soon.

-Damp

*Growl* that pink hair whore is going down! *random smashing noises* ahem well i love sasnaru they are my fav paring i HATE that pink haired whore or please say she will get hers in the end *puppy eyes* please update soon im addicted to this story! i have a pretty good idea who the father of her baby is though hehe. thanks for the recent up date please do it soon your great! -_^

Awwwwww I'm crying I am literally crying
that chapter has some real tear jerker parts in it
it was so beautiful and yet so sad
man I can't wait to find out who the real father of sakura's child is
Man I hater her..she's such a BITCH
this story is so good
Im glad it's finally updated
keep up the great work
can't wait for the next update
I'm looking forward to it XD
SaunNaru Forever!!!!!!!!

SAKURA'S A BITCCCCHHHHHHHH
SHE'S GOING DOWN
I HATE HER I HATE HER I HATE HER!!!!!!!!!!!
Sasuke and Naruto will win and live their happy life..married and with child Yatta!!!!!!!!! XD
I love this story
it's getting so good
and I'm so happy you updated
I've waited for so long XD
Sasuke's gonna kick...Sakura's...asssssssssss!!!!!! hopefully =P
SASUNARU FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
keep up the good work
can't wait for the next chpt
Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee ^_^^_^^_^^_^

I find I'm a bit disappointed.

I know I focus on this a lot, but I really don't like how your playing out the whole Neji thing. Sakura slipped something in his drink, but it didn't matter because he still could have stopped anyways? I can't say I'm loving that at all.

And I also don't understand why they can't just do a paternity test on Sakura. Easy proof that Sasuke isn't the father.

I found Sasuke to be oddly ooc often in the chapter. The crying and the proposing in the middle of the forest, then the indulging of the fangirlism after he proposes.

It's not a horribly written chapter, but it doesn't feel well put together. I think your previous chapters were better.