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for The Better Half

by Meikyuu

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOoooh! Great job! I can't wait to see what happens now. I'm all excited over it! LOL
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely priceless. I loved every moment of it and I can wait for you to update.

-Akiru-
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*LMAO*.. poor Naruto!!.. Poorer Sasuke.. going to have all the build-up in his mind and the Bam! It's a boy!.. Mwahahahahaaha.. I can't wait!!
person Vin
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe <--- Since my normal laugh would use like 12 different letters.

Lol. I await the next chapter~
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....Please hurry and update. SO good, so good.
person Word_Slave
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, that's great, but your mean leaving it there!!!
Slave
person Laurel Runes
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far...very amusing. I was a bit confused at the start with the whole two Naruto thing that seemed to be going on but then it clicked and it was just a riot from there on in. Please write more soon.
person Saiou-chan
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooooooo gonna enjoy this!
person Kimra
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. I love it so far. Can't wait to see what direction you take with this!
person Shirley
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this seems like a really fun fic. There are a lot of Naruto + twin stories out there but I really like how you executed this so far. Please do continue! :)