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for The Better Half

by Meikyuu

person Anon
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had given up on you ever adding to this story....But i am reeeaaalllyy hoping that since its been edited...more chapters will ensue?

Still love it! It cracks me up!
person cyndy
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol.
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far hope you update soon. As for beta I have several writers I beta for but I am always open to more folks since they have their own rate of updating. In other words I am not bogged down I think my email address is up but if not morename4me@yahoo.com
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kick Ass!! I totally want more. I want to know how Neji knows Naruto and if Naruko's gonna be super pissed and whether Sasuke is going to have a big hate-on for the male version. Such a great first chapter! Keep it up baby!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your Story premise is very cute, I can't wait to see what happens ^_^ keep up the good work
person random
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it, it's really cute. Wonder how neji knew naruto? UPDATES
person Madie
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
came across this and absolutly love it:P sasuke behaves absolutly hilarious^^ can't wait for them too meet in school. yey! just hope you havn't given up on the story.. ?! hope not^^ cheerio
person Jessica
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. You must update...and quickly! I absolutely ~love~ this story! The set-up, the unexpected relationships, the definite humor and casual banter...I love it all! Please, please, come back soon with a chapter!...And if you e-mail readers when you update, please do so for me! Thanks! You've made my day! ^-^
person bluewow
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is *smile worthy*. PLEASE keep writhing; I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I really like how the characters are interacting with each other.
person barara
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
U gotta continue!! <3