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for The Better Half

by Meikyuu

person oldie_joe
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A pleasant read. You should write another chapter=))
The plot is not too banal, and the style is not bad.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is good. very good. i like the writing style and the vibes i'm getting from your characters. i think sasuke is in for the time of his life in this fic with nayami around. so needless to say, i'll be looking foward to your next update. so until next time, ja.

~Devious
person Sas-uke
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Strangely enticing. Debated on whether or not to read this and I guess I made the right decision. Looking forward to more. Why are first chapters always such cliffhangers...?
person sarah
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!

You. Win. At. Life.

no seriously, i loved this fic, it was sooooooo hilarious!! lol.

sequel?? *bats eyelids*
person COCO bean 1319
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking love it, it is a great AU. Also another interesting Highschool AU is Roommates by FastForward. Advise everyone to check it out. Please Write more.
person Quirk
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's well written, and just FUNNY. Thank you and more please!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hilarious, keep going!
person MeLaiya
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo I am loving this so far.Please hurry and update a.s.a.p. I cant wait to see what you have to put up next.
person Allys
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I LOVE IT!!! That was too funny, I can't wait for the horrible realization, and I LUV that Neji knows (snickers) XD. Update soon - PLEASE!!!!
person zrina
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning very much. Looking forward to see where it is going!!