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for The Better Half

by Meikyuu

person T_B
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well written and promising. looking forward to the next installment. ^^
person KinOfDragons
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles*...*giggles some more* This story is so good! XD Though, I do wonder how Naruko will act when she finds out her man is all hot and bothered for her brother! Priceless! <3<3 Love it! Hope you update soon.
person sphairax
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Sasuke's face when he finds out *smirk*
and I hope you continue this 'caus it's really awesome ^^
person eien no ren
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh.... I am so looking forward to this story's next update!!! Jeez! I like it a lot! that was soo cool... I was there... in the middle of the party watching everybody dance, smoke and hang around! You have a wonderful knack at portraying images...nyan! I loved it!
person XZanayu
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story looks promising. Please continue!!
person Arrielle
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D= Gah only one chapter so far....... TT_TT I REALLY want to read more!!! Grammer and spelling is great... and as of now its really funny and seems like its going somewhere!! (unlike some other fanfictions) I can't wait to see where you take this!! Please update as soon as posible! ^^
person Gonrie
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want more please!