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for Pain

by ladygizarme

person silver_tears
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I love how the song seamlessly connects with the story and how the lyrics only enhance the tone of the piece. Beautiful, bravo! Hope to read more of your work :)
person Houseki
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off... I still have to laugh that not only you and I both thought of doing fics to that song, but so did Ash *snickers* Mind reading cult strikes again? :p

Anyways, yeah that was hot. Sad, for both Sai and Naru, but still quite hot. You did a great job, yet again! ^__^ Now on to the next one!

Less than 3,

Nic
person Shosuro
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh the ANGST!!!
oh the sweet smexy Angst!!!

I love the pairing!
THanks for the oneshot!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my. god. i absolutely love this song (it's being playing non-stop in my car since i got the cd) and this fic just made me love it even more. i love the way it was written and it caught the emotions of the song perfectly. thanks for sharing.
person sris
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck that was good! Hot and, well, HOT! And so goddamn sad. Yep, really pleasurable and in it's own way beautiful oneshot. Spank you for that.
person animehead
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that was so...I don't have a word for it. It was simply amazing. Honestly, I want to say more about it, but I really am speechless. You are an excellent writter. Wow, simply stunning.
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so HOT! Nyan!! So incredibly hot and insightful! I agree... Naruto's guilt seems to stem from his feelings of anger. He is very hot tempered and its only natural. And the pairing! I loved it immensely. Yup... you said it was a one shot... care to write more about this whole situation??? maybe sasuke's pov if you intend to redeem him or not and if finally Sai gets what he wants or not... it would definitely be interesting to say the least... ne? Anyway its your shot! See ya!
person Darling_425
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Now you made me sad. Thank you!
I yhink Sai is fealing lonely and... um ok.
person Zrina
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah..... Wow, that was very powerful!! I have never seen Sai written so well, you have done a truly amazing job!! The story is very believable and just flows so well. The smex was hot and the emotions were raw and honest. It was a pleasure to read!!

Zrina