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dude...
poor gaara, he doesnt even know the difference between reality and dreams.



lustful and kawaii, GREAT COMBINATION.

O_O *drools*
This is absolutly adorable, in a steamy hot sort of way. The imagery in this is simply amazing, so colorful. Im very impressed!
Im now offically addicted to your fics. Please write more~!
Luff!!!
~Narutoad
=^^=

Aaaww, Gaara is such a cute uke ^>^
There should be more ofthese kind of fics,
cute and fluffy yet hot and smutty.
Your an awesome author, btw

You…described the sensations of actually making out…and you did it well….Yeah, it’s safe to say you rock at smut. ….I’m over here because of Lemon Drops…and because I love NaruGaaNaru…^___^
Mesh=score. Your fic makes me…very happy…haha
I looove the pretext—an eyelash and a dream, that’s great.

I absolutely love these two as a couple and this was definitely a very steamy piece of smut, now I can go and read the sequel! :)

Amazing, totally loved it. Hot, sweet, and a great ending to boot.

Damn......
HOT Damn!!!
I was reading this one on my cell phone at work today.
Needless to say that I had a blush on my cheek and I was wondering if it was just me or was it hot in there? Turns out your story made my all hot and bothered and I had to take a breather before I could control the stupid grin that kept surfacing on my face. I mean I like stories. There are some that are beautifully writen and then there was yours. I mean I started to think that I need to go the restroom for a "break". BUT I didn't! I controlled it. But when I got home I got on the computer so I can write this little review and to let you know that your story has touched me.....hahaha....Thanks for this wonderful ONESHOT!!!

holy crap!! first lemon ever?! you've got to be kidding me. that wasn't just hot, that was fricking HAWT! lol. seriously, that was excellently written. i just loved the passion, fierceness and the sweetness we got at the end. i look foward to seeing more of this pairing from you in the future. thanks for sharing.

~Devious

It took me forever to find a GaaraxNaruto fic ^_^ And this one's cute too!! Make more please!!!

Ja ne

I DID enjoy your first lemon as a matter of fact! I'm impressed; it's well thought out, led slowly, descriptive...I could go on if needed. I would say it bordered on perfect. Let me see if I can help make your next one so. The only problem you had was a small lack of realism. A man cannot cum that many times in such a short period. If you had left it at twice (cutting out the middle one) it would have been slightly more realistic, and a smoother flow to your story. I say the middle, because the last 2 were WAY too close together. And I know there are rare cases of men who have been able to experience multiple orgasms, and men who have trained their bodies (called a non-ejaculatory method) in order to have multiple orgasms, but its few and far between. (that last explanation is more for your readers) Other than that slight bump in my read, I thouroughly enjoyed your story. Thanks, and please feel free to write more PWP one-shots. I'm a smut addict!

One more thing: Thanks for the seme-Naruto. There's really not enough of those stories, and he has a very strong personality. I don't see how he keeps ending up as an uke. I do recommend a couple of stories for you. Kind of fits with you character analysis in this story: Keys to Diplomacy (must be read first), and then Keys to Leadership. The second being one of my all time favorites. Why? Because he just deserves it, that's why! (Naruto's such a sly lil' guy)