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I'm feeling kind of evil so I would really like for his wake-up to be jarring. I must give you cookies and milk for your excellent work. That was a very loooooooong chappie and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. This story is really on a roll, can't wait till the next installement. When Andrew almost dropped Sasuke 'cause he felt his bones moving in his body I thought I was going to laugh so hard, I can totally see that happining.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

omg, so cool! kyuubi is such a smooth talker! though i am desperately awaiting sasuke and andrew's talk. i mean, sasuke will see naruto, andrew will see suki, and it will all be just so angsty and stuff that i'm so very excited!

as to sasuke's awakening, maybe he could sense something disturbing in the room, and come to and see hikaru standing over him with a very displeased look on his face, like he's been debating whether the consequences of killing sasuke are worth it. and then when sasuke readies to strike to defend himself, andrew comes in, so forth and so on.

but whatever you do, i'm so psyched, and i can't wait for the next chapter!! hope to read it soon! good luck!

It was funny having Kyuubi talking with the kids and Andrew! Too bad that Naruto didn't fire Violet/Sakura because I don't trust her not to try molesting Sasuke again.

i am just on pins and needles waiting for andrew and sasuke to speak! but andrew and kyuubi?! wtf? and why did suki know that sasuke would be coming? what is going on there? as for naruto being still alive and in sasuke's body... if that's true (and not something sasuke's grief stricken mind has concocted) i am so super pysched about it!

so many questions, and i can't wait to have them answered! update as soon as you can!!

Heartwrenching first chapter. Sasuke's pained and bewildered awakening was fascinating to see. You weave a very nice narrative, meshing the shinobi world with the real world. I'm quite enjoying the slow unfolding of events with Andrew and the children and I can't wait to see Sasuke and Andrew have a real conversation. I rarely bookmark the stories on this site, since there is a predominance of plotless porn (good in its own but not emotionally satisfying) but your story alone makes this site worth visiting. Looking forward to your next update.

Sincerely,
Mirrin.

I adore you. I don't care if the chapter was late in coming! It still came! I don't care if i was momentarily lost a couple of times! Being confused can be fun! But i do care lots about this story!Waaaah! Do you have any idea how many times i started to tear up while reading this recent chapter!? >=O!!! It was so sad! <_> Poor Sasuke... and then it got so happy!!! Whoa, i never woulda thought Naruto's soul would be in there with Kyuubi, but hey! There are a lot of things from the 'outside of the box' that you've done with this story; including the portion about Suki and Hikaru's past (Oh my more Uchihas!) But i love it, i love it, i love it alot! And i'll love it even more when i learn more about what's going to happen with our favorite characters in this alternate dimension! I didn't know you had another story posted! So i get to read more of your work! yay me!! *Spins*

Yay! Naruto's spirit is still alive! I'm so happy! But Naruto needs a body. :D

This story is on a roll. I really enjoy the plot even with all it's twist and turns. I wanna know what happened to Kyuubi and What happened to Sasuke after he said 'Kai'. Anywho I think I know who Hikaru is...he resembles Itachi that is probably why Sasuke attacked him in his sleep and why Hikaru doesn't like him. Well I would just like to say Keep up the good work and I'm really looking forward to the next chappie in two weeks.

ja ne till next time

O.o What/who was that voice in Andrew's head screaming 'NO'?

Oh so you have time to update this but not 'Bared Naked'? Sorry if I sound mean, but it's true!! >_< I am so tensed up cuz I want to know what happens next in 'Bared Naked' Please update as soon as you possibly can...and I hope that 15 page paper turns out well.

that was so very exciting! i was so thrilled when they finally saw the flying crane. and where is kyuubi? what happened to sasuke when he tried to dispel the genjutsu? (which i now acknowledge is not what is going on because he's obviously still there) ^.^ oh, i can't wait for the next chapter! but good luck on your paper first!