rate_review Reviews

I really liked this chapter. The kids are so cute and so is Sasuke. I wonder how he's going to get back to his room? :)

Well, that was awesome. There's not much else I can praise except that you write conciousness very well. I hope that makes sense. The drifting between dreams/nightmares and reality is very well executed and I can't wait to see how the realm where Sasuke has landed mirrors the world he was raised in. I still don't understand how he got there, but I don't believe you have explained that part yet. Also, I love how you characterize Kyuubi. He's hilarious! I'm not sure how or if the sex scene between Kyuubi and Sasuke (in his head) will affect the plot. Perhaps mpreg, which is always nice, but I'm trying to not get my hopes up for it.

Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye open for the sixth chapter.

Good luck and, as always, update soon!
~Sin

Certainly, this story was beginning to raise my eyebrow. And then I just decided that A) it's a very vivid dream or B) and alternate universe. Either way, I caught onto the Andrew= Naruto, Frank= Kakashi, and the twin boys= um... mysteriously the children of Sasuke and Naruto? My only more immediate question is the inclusion of English names among Japanese ones. Not quite sure about that... but still, I enjoy the story. And I plan to keep looking forward to new chapters.

ah, so many things make sense now!! and i'm thinking sasuke has somehow stumbled into a parallel world of some sort. what i really want to know, though, is why the hyuuga still have their same names...

this is getting so very interesting, and i have my theories about sasuke and the twins, but i can just picture them being completely wrong and you laughing as you read it, so i'll keep them to myself. ^.^

i know what you mean about school, as i myself haven't found the time to write and do everything i need to do for classes, so i assure you i'll wait patiently for the next chapter and give it shining praise! ^.~ until next time!!

*Sighs* Nicely written. I actually wasn't expecting this, which is odd. Most SasuNaruSasu is so cliche nowadays. It's starting to get exciting now, I believe. Children always mix things up, now don't they? Well, can't wait for the next update. Let me wander off, now.

TnT

is naruto really dead? how did sasuke get the kyuubi? its confusing but good!

I have to admit that this chapter (and story) has me completely befuddled. I'm so lost, but in a good way. I'll trust you to write me out of this little confused hole I'm currently residing in. My guess is that it isn't Naruto, it's Arashi, but that's just me. I'll just sit here being confused until you update again (please don't confuse me more...my brain can't quite take it). Really, I do want to compliment you on the well-written nature of this story. It is intelligent and poignant (plus a helping of "what in the hell is going on?"). Hurry up and update so I can put my poor broken mind at ease.

yey a new chapter! I LOVED IT!!!!!! and cant wait for more!

confused a little bit but i still like the story. i am just gonna wait and see if the next chapter clears things up for me. this is not a bad thing i love mysteries. can't wait for the next update.

i have been waiting for an update to this story, and you have delivered. i am so confused at this point, i'm beginning to think the entire story is sasuke's delusional dream as he heals in konoha hospital. i don't think i've ever read a story where i want to cry every chapter. please keep up the wonderful work, and update soon!!