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for The Banks Of The River Styx

by AkashaEmily

person sadistickiss
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so confused when I read the first chapter. I just sat there thinking "Did I miss something? " But then I kept going and I realised "Ohhh I see... NARUTO'S DEAD?!!?!?" And while I was reading, I was almost trembling screaming "NO. THIS IS SO WRONG. WHERE IS NARUTO?!" Poor, poor, poor Sasuke. Ack. The angst is going to kill me soon...

I love it! I absolutely love it. Well... I don't love the summary much... (sorry ^^''). But the fic is awesome! It's heartbreaking. It's wrenching. It's beautiful. And I keep getting confused but maybe that's 'cos I'm slow =_=''...

Can't wait til you update! I want to know what this other 'world' is about... ^^
person Emily
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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naru-chan's dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sas-uke
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't planning on reading this, but I found a delightful surprise when I did. Well-written and an engaging, angst-ridden plot. Keep up the good work.
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very emotional and powerful beginning to a story which delves perfectly into the messed up psyche of Sasuke Uchiha. I applaud you for doing so well. Thanks, I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Kitsunefun
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am hopeing that Naruto really isnt dead... cause Gaara in the manga wasnt completely dead, he got revived and I am thinking even if it means Naruto loosing his memory him and Sasuke will still meet again
person seraphym
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love the stream of consciousness naration style used in this fic. I'd love to read more and I can't wait for updates! The way you've set up this story allows for so many possibilities! I really hope Sasuke and Naruto have a reunion in the afterlife, and I'd love to see some more integratyed from the myth of the River Styx!
person Nomme de Plume
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that first chapter... i had to keep myself from crying three times. jesus, this is like the best fic ever! i want more, seriously. i want to know where he is, who has him, will he ever get back to konoha, do tsunade and the others know about naruto, what the heck's going on?!! but i'll wait patiently like a good girl. update soon!!
person talking_butterfly
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
2nd chapter was also very interesting. you already pulled me into this sad, but wonderful story... can't wait for the next installment! it's... damn, i hope the uchiha will meet naruto again... oh gawd, i really hope it. *cries*
person **Hinata**
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... I was trying to get away from all the sad angsty fics when I found yours... lol I thought it was gonna be a sweet fluffy AU lol. Boy, was I wrong? lol God, I hope neither of them are gonna die and i must say i'm quite confused about that whole chapter lol. But I definately have to see where this is going now. Please update soon!!!!!!

Hinata-chan
person dragon_agility
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah

I'm confused, but that's the effect of this chapter, right? I like the fact that I'm not exactly sure what's going on but I really felt Sasuke's emotions. Aww, I just want to hug him!

Great job: your writing skills are very descriptive! Until next time, hurry with the next chapter!