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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful first chapter...
While reading I could really put myself in Sasuke's position - very emotional, very well written. I absolutely adore your style. Keep up the great work and please update! ^^
While reading I could really put myself in Sasuke's position - very emotional, very well written. I absolutely adore your style. Keep up the great work and please update! ^^
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really liked it. Refreshing.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far it is awesome! There is so much emotion, and the story has me enthralled. Usually if there are any major spelling or grammar mistakes I notice and I get tripped up while I'm reading, but this was really smooth. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm faving this story for sure.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm almost ready to cry. Poor Sasuke, I feel so bad for him. He had to deal with a corpse now he has to deal with loving some one that is clearly dead, and knowing that he won't be able to meet him in the after life. Will he be able to deal with every day life now?
Okay I really don't have anything to say about your writting...it was only the first chapter and you're not too far into the story line. Anything can happen...and I hope you make the read worth it. XD
Okay I really don't have anything to say about your writting...it was only the first chapter and you're not too far into the story line. Anything can happen...and I hope you make the read worth it. XD