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Jeez...This is such an amazing story!
As I read it, I would constantly think of how possible it could be. Sure, some things require work but the emotion, the writing, the DETAIL. I was amazed by all of it. The last chapter in particular had be. The scene where Naruto was so alone and all, I was crying the whole time. Thanks for writing the amazing work. I reallllly hope to read more of it
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Oh man, you gotta update really soon, pleassssssse~~ This chap was one of the greatest. Poor Naruto, he deserves to be treated so much better, he has saved his villiage so many times, they need to stop being asses and smarten up! I hope Hinata and Neji will be ok! Who are these darn cat people stirring up this trouble? I wonder why Hinata did not know Naruto's birthday, I mean, she is so in love with him, I thought she would be the first to give him a gift... Oh, well, kitty names, umm... I am into unique names for pets, not over used names like fluffy and sweety and such. Using star signs and stuff works good, like, Gemini, or Gem, Star or Luna for a girl kitty. Or go Japanese with the names, like Hiroko, meaning generous, or Aiko, meaning little loved one for a girl. Akira- intelligent, or Kiyoshi- the quiet one, for a boy. Sorry, going on and on, but those are just a few names, so please, continue soon, I need to know the fate of Hina and Neji!! Pleaaaassse!??

ok, I'm loving this. Seeing the world through Sasuke's eyes as a kitten is hilarious! Please do update agian soon!

i'm really enjoying reading this story progress. the sleepover was cute, with hinata and naruto's show for the kids and sasu-kitty, and all sasuke's observations. i liked that you put in about naruto's self-encouraging phrase decorations, too. and i'm really finding it cuter and cuter how sasuke is still sasuke in his mind, but his actions seem to be more and more kittenlike despite his annoyance at his own actions :p nyaaa and he's realizing more of an affection for naruto and it is so sweet how it's happening, with his concerns and observations and even panic (and especially i giggled when he realized he'd been acting like hinata when naruto came out of the shower lol!) also, the big confrontation with EVERYONE showing up at naruto's house the morning after the sleepover was quite entertaining even though it also had its tense moments.

i can't wait to read more and i hope we find out more about naruto's "illness" soon!!

The Sasuke-puffing-fur part was ultra-cute! Being a kitten suits Sasuke so well! The funny part that it suits him more than being a grown up cat!

I have no idea where you are going with this story...AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT!! XD Usually I wouldn't because if I don't know what's going on that means the writer isn't putting the details in, or writing well, or employing good use of transitions. You're piece is easy to read and is chalk full of lovely details. I thought that this last chapter is even showing a greater skill and grasp of writing than what some of the earlier chapters had (though maybe that's because you took the time to edit? You know, I have a prof. that says the true act of writing begins when you revise--rough drafts is just dabbling, revising and reworking make you a writer--something like that...) Anywho, I really like the way you're writing this and I like that you're not giving anything away, but at the same time, you're not hiding things from the reader either. We can 'see' what's going on even if we don't know how to interpret what we're seeing yet. That is very, very well done.

With that, I accept the convention of your time bubble because regardless of whether it could fit into canon or not, you are being consistent with the build-up of the world you are portraying--and in fanfics, that can be more important than staying true to canon.

Again, the best Kitten!Sasuke fic I have read to date. Now I will cross my fingers and hope that the updates keep on coming! ^_^

Yay another chappie and this one was soo good too, loved the whole interaction between Hinata and the kids, poor Naruto though, at least THEY said it tasted good after trying it, team 7 never did, you would think at least Kakashi woulds say something..the meanies...and who are the others?? what friends?? and hiding up??? hes not gonna change is he? I know the need to hide out from the villagers but thats pretty much it right?? again others??? and will Sasuke be with him through this all?? oooh I cant wait, I would just LOVE, ok not love love persay but you get my point, I would love to see someone try to break in with not only the Hokages grandson but the Hyuuga hieress...ooh they would be in sooooo much trouble, at least I am hopeing they would, anyhow thanks for the read, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

I appreciate this fic so much! I have always liked the Sasuke-gets-turned-into-a-cute-fluffy-animal-and-finds-out-more-about-Naruto fics, but I usually come away from them horribly disappointed because people twist Naruto's character. A lot of times, it turns out Naruto is a master chef, or Naruto being clumsy is all just an act, or a string of other things, that while cool personality characteristics, they're NOT what makes Naruto cool. What makes Naruto cool is that he has that never-say-die personality that would lead him to nurse a severely mauled kitten even when the veternarian had labeled it a lost cause, he has little signs hanging up in his kitchen, and so what if he's not a culinary genius--He'll still kick out the best stew that he can for the people he cares about! I thought that so far you've been very insightful and true to Naruto and Hinata as well for that matter, and I think that that makes for a better story. People shouldn't try to change who Naruto intrinsically is to try to make him cool because he already is!

...sorry. I think I may be ranting...

Anywho, with that out of my system, from a writerly perspective, the vet chapter could use some clean-up. For example, I think it would have a better flow if you started out with Naruto outside of the vet clinic, switched to Sasuke's POV, and then back to Naruto's. That's another thing that could be polished though. You start out with Naruto POV, but then suddenly it's Hinata POV. This isn't bad! It just needs a few more transitions, a few more details. I actually think that you could write the start of the Naruto/Hinata scene completely in Hinata's POV.

Then of course there's the mystery of what is wrong with Naruto XD
I think that this could prove to be interesting, but it's really confusing when it first comes up because it seems so random and disjointed, partially from the POV shifts, partially from a need for some more details. Also, the whole Hinata thought tangent of Naruto-is-being-abused really threw me for a loop so that I really had no idea what was going on.

And with all that said, to be quite honest, I'm more excited about finding out what happens next than seeing you fix what's already been written. If the above criticism is helpful, use it, if not, put it on a back burner, realize that I'm a drooling fan who's desperate for an update and has just had one too many writing classes....


...and UPDATE!! :3

Seriously, I'm super-excited with what you are doing here. Uber super excited. Like when I got to the stew part and it *popped*, I was all like OMFG! Somebody's writing a Sasuke-goes-cute-and-fluffy fic and they're not going all OOC on me!! *melted in happiness*
The drugged kitten part? *I'm on to you! And I'm on to you too!* I can't articulate how much that made me laugh. And the *how* of Sasuke getting turned into a kitten...sheer-artistic-genius. It's one of those things where I'm like, "I would have never thought of that," but now that I've read it, it makes so much stinking sense!

Oh, oh! I had another question! What's the setting? I got the impression that the third is still *alive* but Naruto and the rookie nine are all fifteen? Shall I just assume this is an alternate timeline?...because I can do that ^_^

Really, thank you for this, and I hope you keep on going strong!

Yaaay, you updated, sweet! Hmm, Naruto is getting a fever, and it has something to do with the nine tail fox... ooh, the suspense. He has to protect his visitors, especially Hinata, awww, he is so giving and caring. Damn those villagers for being so damn evil toward him, when he had done so much for them! Grr, well, please, do continue soon.

hmm so when did this happen?? when did you have to be logged on to review?? guess it cuts down on the flamers and all those lame people who just like to start crap, anyhow on to the review, you soo know Im loving this, so the village is ganging up on Naruto again, I sooo hope Hinata sees something or finds out so she can tell some people off cause you know Hinata, argue with her and you have the whole Hyuuga clan after your butts lol, and awwwwwwww sasuke is being fed by bottle how cute and embarassing for him, lol, I sooo cant wait to see what Sasuke see as he stays with Naruto, sees how the poor boy is tormented and hated, ooh wont Sasuke be pissed, and still wondering who the othr cat people were who changed Sasu...great work cant wait for more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)