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for Hidden Beneath

by darkskysong

person Netsubo
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I read the 12th chapter on ff.net so I'm glad of that....but are you going to write anymore of this story on either of them???? I wants to read it!
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh darkskysong.......when can we have another chapter please?????? *big puppy dog eyes*
this chappie was great but i would love to see the ending! ~_^
person OHMYGOD
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like I said, OH MY GOD!
I've been dying for this story!
I just can't say how happy I am that you've decided to work on it again!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 11

I think that was really funny Sasuke telling Naruto no and Naruto going ahead anyways....that is SOOOOO like them and how they would be together. This is just so SWEET!!! I like this relaxed feeling between Naruto and Sasuke....I so want to read more like this!!!! This is such a peaceful and relaxing story and fun to read!!!! I like the pace and the approach plus the humor is just too funny!! LOVE IT!!! I find I keep rereading it when ever I find a new update.....I read it all over again......its just so enjoyable that its great each and every time!!!
person Kerrisa
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At first the references to Sasuke, Sasu-kun, Uchiha-sama, and nuke-nin were distracting as I wasn't sure it was necessary to jump to and fro on so many different ways to refer to Sasuke, but after reading up until this point I get why you did what you did, at least for the first 3 names) and it almost makes me want to re-read the passages (but that was a lot of reading!). I think you should still try and be cautious with that though, because it is very distracting when Sasuke is referred to 3 different ways in one small paragraph X_X

That aside I love Naruto as a fox! He's so cute! Sasuke is completely not treating him cautiously as a person should when dealing with a hurt wild animal, that should befearful and quick to attack and defend itself. But Sasuke knows the fox is Naruto, and apparently Naruto doesn't know too much about how a wild animal should act, or he's completely forgot about his act with his shock and joy at being around Sasuke again, that and maybe the drugs are really keeping him off his game. I can't wait until Sasuke reveals to Naruto that he does know who he is =) The cuddling is so adorable!

I am enjoying the story and hope you update again soon =D XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Looks like Naruto is helping out with Sasuke's training albeit not by choice. LOL! So cute! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person smint45
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is such a great story!!! I absoloutly love it!!! I can't wait till Sasuke tells Naruto that he knows!!! Hope there will be some Sasu/Naru smutt in the near future!!!1 The idea with the three personalitys is great!!! Kind of creepy but great non the less!!! Hope we can have a nice foursome sometime (if you can say that cause two of the ocupants don't have a body!!) Well perhaps in one osasukes Genjutsus (is it spelled like that??) they can have some fun *evil grin* Well I really like this story and I hope to hear from you soon!!!
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is too funny.

I'm still lead to believe that Naruto's transformation is a true one. Any other shinobi would have lost his jutsu once so severely injured. Naruto's kept his form and is healing in it. I love how Sasuke's continuing to treat him like a fox. The trickster has become the tricked!
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
been awhile........i just noticed that this had an update from ya.

anyways........looking very much to the ending!!

very great and awesome!! please finish!!
person LumiiSol
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've missed this story and I'm glad you've decided to continue it! I love the budding trust between Naruto and Sasuke and I can't wait to see how their relationship (platonic and otherwise) progresses. And besides, who wouldn't enjoy a story about Sasuke interacting with (and basically entertaining) a fox!Naruto? Keep up the good work!!!