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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It started out slow but was well worth the wait. I love foxy Naruto and I can't wait to see Sasuke's sadistic plan to mess with Naruto, even though it won't really be sadistic.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I just found you story and I am extremely impressed. I love how you are portraying the characters, revealing new fascinating aspects of their personalities but still keeping them in character. The story is well written and I am really enjoying the read, thanks for writing it! Can you update me when you post another chapter?
Email - darkelf205@hotmail.com
Email - darkelf205@hotmail.com
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I appreciate your story, Hidden Beneath, more than you know. It is different from other fanfiction out there on the web. The plot is well structured, the characters are nicely rounded and you can actually UNDERSTAND what the story is about. I absolutly love this fic. If you are to continue it, it would be an honour to recieve updates. Feel free to e-mail me anytime. ^^
~Ataya~
I appreciate your story, Hidden Beneath, more than you know. It is different from other fanfiction out there on the web. The plot is well structured, the characters are nicely rounded and you can actually UNDERSTAND what the story is about. I absolutly love this fic. If you are to continue it, it would be an honour to recieve updates. Feel free to e-mail me anytime. ^^
~Ataya~
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story so far
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw.. how cute.
Its good to see that Kakashi didn't loose track of Naruto during their run. ^^
Its good to see that Kakashi didn't loose track of Naruto during their run. ^^
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love how you depict Sasu-kun! Sooo kawaii.
-Damp *Wow, I learned a lot of new words thanks to reading this ;) *
-Damp *Wow, I learned a lot of new words thanks to reading this ;) *
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've always liked a good, twisting plot, and this one has a nice flow while still not laying everything straight out. hehehe... and i wonder what havoc will be wrecked in the halls of naruto's mind. i am waiting to read more!!! onegai?????
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In this chapter, I find the conversation between the Uchiha(s) and Kyuubi is really interesting.
I find the innocent little Uchiha to be fun as well. At least this Uchiha is more complex and deep than the usual Sasuke that I usually read.
I wonder what punishment he'll give the little fox. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh ya... thanks again for the story.
I find the innocent little Uchiha to be fun as well. At least this Uchiha is more complex and deep than the usual Sasuke that I usually read.
I wonder what punishment he'll give the little fox. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh ya... thanks again for the story.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! You've finally caught up and passed where you were up to when you originally wrote this story. I admit I was worried last time when it appeared Sasuke was about to discover Naruto's identity... then you up and restarted the story!!!!!
I must say that after so long a wait, I'm excited again and eager to read what happens next. Sasuke's reactions were great and I love how his inner child personna self encouraged his current self not to harm him. Naruto's personal messy mindscape was a nice touch as well. ^^
Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next update! Huzzah!
I must say that after so long a wait, I'm excited again and eager to read what happens next. Sasuke's reactions were great and I love how his inner child personna self encouraged his current self not to harm him. Naruto's personal messy mindscape was a nice touch as well. ^^
Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next update! Huzzah!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really like this story!