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for Hidden Beneath

by darkskysong

person Mayana
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I wonder what Kakashi will do... =3 Er, here's my email if you could send me the next update.

Mayana-chan@live.ca

Thanks!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was always a great story. I'm happy to see you rewriting it, if it means more updates. =^^=
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this is a great story!!! I hope you update soon.
person gaara89
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I really like this story.
person leanne
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am most surprised but it makes sense in order for Sasuke to survive all that he has, he's built himself into multipole personality disorder. Truly unique and now I know why he's been calling himself Uchiha-sama. Can't wait to see what more you do in this story. i love the fox you did the animal parts well, the animal behavior is very close to what the actual animal would do. Very good.
person Hen
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN! I can't wait for the next chapter now! Please update soon!
person Nath
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT!!! OH SHIT!!! OH SHIT !!! This is going to cause lots of troubles for Naruto! I can feel it! I hope Sasuke will not immediatly discover who exactly the little injured kitsune is. I hope he will only get some clues. Because if it's not the case, and he discovers everything... my ! Do you think he will have some roasted kitsune for his next meal ??? Keep writing, I want to know what's going to happen next.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like where you're going with this. You've definately created an original and incredibly solid mind jitsu for Sasuke and I can't wait to see what he finds in the mind of a sleeping Naruto fox. ^^ Will have be back in the Kyuubi's dank basement-like cage, or will it be something different? We've never really been inside Naruto's head before outside of the area that houses the Kyuubi. God only knows what might be lurking around in there.


Good luck reaching those thirty five reviews. You keep reaching for them stars. Heh.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! you finally updated!

The fact that Sasuke couldn't see through Naruto's transformation brings up the question of just what sort of abnormal jitsu was Naruto using, and does this have anything to do with actual kitsune powers? :)
person anon food
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see how Sasuke and Naruto-fox will interact. wonder why Sasuke wouldn't see through the disguise though. i would think any animal with an abnormal chakra signature anywhere would be reason to investigate further. also wonder why Naruto didn't change back when he lost consciousness as he wouldn't have conscious control of his chakra and focusing it. it is curious to see where it will go from here. hope to see more soon.