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for Hidden Beneath

by darkskysong

schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for your story! I like it very much! I hope you plan to add some smutty NaruSasu action in there somewhere.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit surprised to see how few reviews this has got, considering it's one of the most interesting ninjas undercover stories I've seen up in what feels like ages. Perhaps it's the ungrateful soandsos who prefer PWP sex. I love thoughtful stories with depth and clever thinking, a new look at the original story, a twist to the tale. Your fic hits all my requirements for a bloody good read. You do a lovely, droll Kakashi, by the way. *smile*
person Sira
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to have found this story again and look forward to new chapters. I like stories with detail so your descriptions are appreciated. Also, while there are a lot of 'Sasuke turned into a -- and Naruto takes care of him' stories out there, I like the reverse too. But I wonder, would Jiraya bother to be inhibited from hitting on a girl because she reminded him of Naruto? Thanks, and keep up the good work.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah Sasuke has finally appeared and who could turn their back on cute Naurto in fox form anyway. Great chapter, like how you represented Sasuke. Thanks for updating, hope to see more from your story in the future. Take care.
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far!! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next!!
person emp78
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so different; I like it. Please hurry with your next update!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lines next to his nose? Itachi.

This is really good. Keep going.
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! One hell of a cliff hanger though! I can't wait to find out what happens!
person Dragon7
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON
person Dragon7
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My Vote. Is for NaruSasu uke Sasuke because their are way too many uke Naruto stories out there.