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for Hidden Beneath

by darkskysong

person Beachan18
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SasUKE please~! :P

Too many Uke!Naruto fics out there~! Uke!Sasuke needs love too~!
person Hen
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, good cliffhanger! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Hen
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written work. I look forward to reading the rest.
person littleolmee
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why this story doesn't have more reviews . . . I find your writing style very entertaining, easy to follow, the characters are well done, and you have an intersting plot mission going on. I'm not sure where your going with it right now but the chapters are enjoyable to read. I like your idea of Kakashi and Naruto using henge to travel in the form of a dog and fox and then Naruto using his Sexy Jutsu (couldn't remember how to spell it in Japanese-sorry) to mask his identity in the different villages. So just what do you have in mind? Is Naruto and Sasuke going to meet up? Your last chapter leads me to think so. I seen you have a Sas/Nar and Nar/Sas listed as a pairing . . . so does that mean you intented to have this as a slash story? Not that I mind that at all, I really enjoy slash pairing myself. I'm just asking wondering if the story wouldn't get more reviews on the male/male genes instead of being listed as general. Well thank you for sharing the story, I hope you stay with it and that I'll see more from you soon. Take care and thanks again.
person mary
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep going.....its a good story!
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing is good. Sometimes it's a bit difficult to follow. Maybe you can do a chapter summary at the beginning of the chapter.
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has defintely caught my attention. I want more! I'm down for some surprises. Update soon.
person Carmen
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoi! Please update the fastest as u can! btw, if u like the pairings: Ita/Naru and Oro/Naru(as rape) please read my fic! 'Never Willing' is its title! :) I loved the story! I cant wait to see what comes next :P
person Carmen
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I think it's really interesting! :) i love it! mueheh! plz, update soon ;_; or else im gonna cry until u will!
person pwnd
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well as ive heard from somewhere in here b4, thier are authors who barley put details in there that keep people using there minds to fill in the missing spots, and then there are people who put way to many details in that start to make it a little boring or hard to follow. i like your story but you could use a few less details even though you weren't bad at all infact most of those details were greatly put in but like i said you could go without as many.. anywho plze update soon it was good anyways =D