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for I Fall to Pieces

by BishounenKrazed

person Allys
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful, i've always loved that song.
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. nice WAFF, i have happy tears. what more can i say? i loved it--only thing that woulda made it better would be sakura and ino walking in when they kissed lol (that'd have been a bit convenient though i suppose :p)
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it... Should have had Sakura killed though.*Glares* must kill Sakura the bitch. *O.O* sorry, still it was great... good job
person hanyou-elf
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww! *huggles teh boys* you've done, yet again, a wonderful job. i loved this story. the song worked perfectly and you displayed once more, your amazing ability and talent. so good. and though you covered such a long amount of time in such a short amount of space, you did it beautifully. you are a great story teller and you should be proud of what you create. another wonderful job. it was lyrical and poetic and very sad. i almost want to beg for more, but i think it's perfect as is. i would love to know about the relationships he tried but failed at, but i almost don't want to. the important thing is to have naruto and sasuke back together.

and, i know it doesn't help gloom, but yay the colts won!

great job!
~hanyou-elf
person animehead
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!!!! That was soooo sweet. You are so wonderful, do you know that? Yeah, I felt bad for Dallas too, but your wondeful story cheered me up. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading your stories. Take care!
person oraday
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Fluffy. It was seriously emotional. I wanted to cry when Naruto was remembering how Sasuke broke up with him. Sasuke's such a dumbass sometimes (like when he ran off to Orochimaru). Stupid bastard...

:shrug: I loved the ending though. Took my mind of Sasuke's stupidity in the the anime/manga so thanks for that. Fanfics usually remind me of Sasuke's bastardness and thinking about everything that's wrong with Naruto makes me depressed. I'm such a sap. But thanks again for this cheerful fluff. I enjoyed it immensely^.^
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, what can I say? It was extremely well written, emotional, bittersweet, and the song you chose was absolutely perfect. I'm glad to see more AU fics lately, I think they're sometimes more challenging than the Naru-verse fics, since keeping everyone in character can be such a pain, but even more so while taking away all of their ninja abilities and other things. That's why when I see a well written AU, I get happy and immediately give it cyber-cuddles. ^_^ This was a wonderful little read, you've made me fall in love with those two all over again. Very nice work.

And I'm sorry about the Cowboys losing! My brother in law is a huge fan so we all felt the blow in my house. To lose like that - it just doesn't even feel right, you know? It's much more painful when the play is so routine, and you think there's no way it can be messed up. It's clear that the Cowboys should be in the playoffs, though. Damn Seahawks! *glares* My own team, the Patriots are playing today. I'm so nervous.. >_<
person not telling
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute^-^ *glomps Naruto plushie* Please write more fluffy oneshots, they make me happy!