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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so totally hot! *steamy* LOL
schedule
January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Practice!? You don't need practice. A lemon with a story plus a dominant super smexy Iruka - one of the best Kaka/Iru one-shots I've read~! The writing flowed like a stream (except maybe the last few paragraphs?) You ROCK!
schedule
January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like a lot. Iruka a seme. heh.
schedule
January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job for a first lemon! Thanks for posting!
schedule
January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe - what a way to remind your boyfriend that he's yours and your's alone. Nice =D
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like? What's to like about a hot, well-written lemon? I don't like it, no way! I LOVE IT! Its great... really arousing and sensual...nyan. Iruka for once dominating Kakashi... I was almost scared... When Kakashi requested he ride him... I was afraid you would let them do it the usual way... like so many others that start promising but then they turn to same old, same old... I love this! I was cheering Iruka on when he finally pushed inside his lover... I love possesive Iruka... >.> possessive ravens or brunnettes... are so hot... nyan!!! ^.^ And the ending! It was truly marvelous!!! I want to write lemons like yours... so raw, enticing and erotic... nyan!!! so... yes... you could say I liked it....
Did I mention it was hot?
DId I mention it was great!!
Oh, by the way... I loved it... nyan!!
Did I mention it was hot?
DId I mention it was great!!
Oh, by the way... I loved it... nyan!!