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person devil child
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jiraiya finally got Iruka back yay!!! So.......does this mean the smut between them is gonna happen soon or do they still have 2 wait 2 be married?
person Teania
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I'm only on chapter 5 right now but I'm loving this story and even though i'm alittle freaked about the pairing this is a totally hilarious story, I can't count how many times i've had to cover my mouth to keep from waking my family up with my laughter! This is so cool and I can't wait to see what happens!
person TEania
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not even into the middle of chapter 6 and I can't stop laughing!

"He couldn’t even spy on naked girls in the hot springs with Naruto when the boy came around and asked him." that was funny as hell!
person Teania
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i love you so much*bows down and worships you* oh wow i almsot cried so many times and laughed! I swear this is such an awsome story!
person Neko Loves Yaoi
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great but can you make a sequel where the guys are going after Naruto Please I would make you yummy cookies!!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love Ibiki... "Ibiki, who lived next door, had been the one to find the poor sannin. In the act of being beaten to death by a rather alarmingly pink vibrator." That's a scream! *still giggles*

I'm glad Jiraiya finally quit stumbling all over himself and took control of the situation. They need to be a weird, happy family already. Poor Naruto, but everything is okay now. *snuggles*

Can't imagine where you're going from here, but I'll be happily along for the ride.
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that chapter was wonderful!! So much drama and angst god I was in tears!! I have to agree with Iruka, it was cruel what everyone did but the wya he jsut like SNAP i was tempted to iether hide in my closet or under hte bed! Gods he brings a whole new meaning to hell has no fury. Again I am absolutely in love wiht this. I could picture everything in my head gods I wish I could draw this as a comic for you two!! WISH being the word right now. Well Please continued, I mean really! It would be so nice to elave it at such a happy ending--unless you havea cruel twist planned -.- i love you two!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLAO ow my stomach!! Oh man I don't beleive it, hell I wanna know more about that night with buy boy! Oh god, do you realize how hard I am trying not to burst out laughing? For one thing it's 10 past midnight. My stomach already hurts form all the laughing I did earlier. And well, I wouldn't be able to review. Okay well that was damn interesting! Man, some guys jsut have all the luck! I think I liked hte way Jiraiya went bezerk like that. Priceless!! :D
person nakichan
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG XD it was so fucking hot ~ great job ^^
person devil child
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you had Jiraiyarunning all over the place trying to find out who fucked Iruka. I also liked how Lee saved Iruka.