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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Aww, that’s cute: “my beautiful, strong brother.” That’s adoration for you. :heart: (My hearts aren’t working well. T_T) . . . . Heh. Sasuke’s a little uncertain this time, I take it. . . . Man, he’s full of adoration, isn’t he? . . . . Sasuke’s so cute. Since it’s from his POV, it gives a feel of love and vulnerability. And Itachi takes full advantage of that. . . . Aww, “scary new Sharingan.” It is scary. (Though Sasuke doesn’t yet know how scary.) . . . . Nice effect: “flashes of lightning revealing his expression to me.” Eerie. (You spelled “lightning” as “lightening” by the way.) . . . . Man. Darkly erotic. . . . And Sasuke knows it’s “twisted love”. . . . Aww, that’s melancholy, how he’s gone in the morning. And it’s even sadder when we (the readers) remember what happens the next night. It was the last time there was love between them.
That was pretty good for your first Uchihacest fic. =) :heart:
Aww, that’s cute: “my beautiful, strong brother.” That’s adoration for you. :heart: (My hearts aren’t working well. T_T) . . . . Heh. Sasuke’s a little uncertain this time, I take it. . . . Man, he’s full of adoration, isn’t he? . . . . Sasuke’s so cute. Since it’s from his POV, it gives a feel of love and vulnerability. And Itachi takes full advantage of that. . . . Aww, “scary new Sharingan.” It is scary. (Though Sasuke doesn’t yet know how scary.) . . . . Nice effect: “flashes of lightning revealing his expression to me.” Eerie. (You spelled “lightning” as “lightening” by the way.) . . . . Man. Darkly erotic. . . . And Sasuke knows it’s “twisted love”. . . . Aww, that’s melancholy, how he’s gone in the morning. And it’s even sadder when we (the readers) remember what happens the next night. It was the last time there was love between them.
That was pretty good for your first Uchihacest fic. =) :heart:
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was awesome! Really that's all I can say... (Speechless)
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! The Uchiha brothers are so dirty and slutty with each other LOL
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's something about this fic that keeps me coming back to read it, over and over. I just read the reviews, and I realized I never posted one! I thought I did, the first time I read it. Sorry... -_- I feel bad now. So - here's the review!
Gorgeous. I love the storm outside, such a dramatic setting for the last tender moment between the young Uchiha brothers. And heartbreaking to think that what Itachi tells Sasuke the next day is the truth - that he was always just acting the part of the brother Sasuke wanted him to be. (I don't believe that, anyway, but--) Sasuke's desperate devotion to his older brother is so sweet, he's trying so hard to make him happy... And, God, but I can't help it, it's so freaking HOT. Ah, my weakness for young-Uchihacest, my need for it is so utterly slaked by this perfect little fic. I love it when Itachi loses his cool and it's believable. And that line he says when he's coming... I think I saw spots in front of my eyes the first time I read it. Love. This. Freaking. Story.
I will be reading it again, and again, and again, I'm sure. Yeah, you should totally write more Ita/Sasu.
Gorgeous. I love the storm outside, such a dramatic setting for the last tender moment between the young Uchiha brothers. And heartbreaking to think that what Itachi tells Sasuke the next day is the truth - that he was always just acting the part of the brother Sasuke wanted him to be. (I don't believe that, anyway, but--) Sasuke's desperate devotion to his older brother is so sweet, he's trying so hard to make him happy... And, God, but I can't help it, it's so freaking HOT. Ah, my weakness for young-Uchihacest, my need for it is so utterly slaked by this perfect little fic. I love it when Itachi loses his cool and it's believable. And that line he says when he's coming... I think I saw spots in front of my eyes the first time I read it. Love. This. Freaking. Story.
I will be reading it again, and again, and again, I'm sure. Yeah, you should totally write more Ita/Sasu.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I love this paring a lot too. I thought you did a really good job.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... beautiful. *tear*
Geez, I don't know what it is about those two, but those brothers drive me crazy. You did a wonderful job. (: I hope to read more from you soon.
Geez, I don't know what it is about those two, but those brothers drive me crazy. You did a wonderful job. (: I hope to read more from you soon.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I hope there chapter two in this.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great!! O_O I hope you'll write more uchihacest. x3 I love it! =D Very few, if any, errors.. ^^
~Jamie
~Jamie
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I usually prefer Uchihacest-fics where Sasuke is a teen, I loved this one!
It was so well written, from the general flow of the language, to the lemon itself. And of course the way you described their relationship.
And of course, Itachi was dead sexy *giggle*
Keep writing! ^___^
Best wishes, Carola ^.^
It was so well written, from the general flow of the language, to the lemon itself. And of course the way you described their relationship.
And of course, Itachi was dead sexy *giggle*
Keep writing! ^___^
Best wishes, Carola ^.^
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very well written and i was very pleased with the plot. the lemon was pretty good, and i liked how you showed their relationship. i think it was quite in-character for them, so congrats on that. a lot of people can't do that very well.~