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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm... WAO!!! That was beautifull one of the best story I've ever read about them just WAO!!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really Good story. Great emotional expression in your writing. It was eloquent I believe in its heartache, tasteful passion, sacrifice, and agony.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful.....and sad.....I cried at the end...
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so many things. It's beautiful, and heartbreaking, and a genuine pleasure to read. You've captured them all so perfectly, the way their love is so tangled, but it's still love.
I feel a little bit teary after reading this.
Thank you for writing this fic. It was a joy to experience.
I feel a little bit teary after reading this.
Thank you for writing this fic. It was a joy to experience.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was very,...good to say the least, you really captured their feeling, actions, had enouph detail, but not too much, the best naruto fanfiction i have ever read by far, i must say your exacution is flawless.
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story of yours. It's so poignant and really manages to bring out the dynamics between Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that's so sad...and hot...mmm...and aww. I love it. You're a very talented writer.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, especially the last few paragraphs. It's odd to have Martin Luther King Jr. quotes for a piece of erotica (and sorta preverse, no offense), but it really worked well with the tone of the fic. I'm impressed. Very well written and emotional. Kudos.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must tell you,... this is one of the greatest pieces of Naruto fanfiction I have EVER READ. I am totally honest about that, just as honest as my tears that are currently running down my cheeks. My chest is constricting from the pain in the words you wrote... It's so surreal how you could make it... God what an awesome writer you are!!! Goodness...
I'm totally speechless from this point on...
*ten minutes later* you know... With that kind of emotion, you've analyzed their different personalities in complete understanding, you're a bloody genius. They are so in characther that I'll be waiting for this to happen in the manga or anime!!! With this kind of talent you should.... I don't know what you should... I'd really like you to keep using it... I'm sure everyone else that's read this story thinks you have a really good talent.
I've been thinking it through, and you are, easily, taking the 1st place in all the fanfics I've read so far.
*smiles* Great work.
I'm totally speechless from this point on...
*ten minutes later* you know... With that kind of emotion, you've analyzed their different personalities in complete understanding, you're a bloody genius. They are so in characther that I'll be waiting for this to happen in the manga or anime!!! With this kind of talent you should.... I don't know what you should... I'd really like you to keep using it... I'm sure everyone else that's read this story thinks you have a really good talent.
I've been thinking it through, and you are, easily, taking the 1st place in all the fanfics I've read so far.
*smiles* Great work.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful story! Well-written, and not all for the smut.... You describe everything so well! And the tradegy and angst fit the three so well.... I'm just totally touched by this story....I wish it was a multi-chapter story, and more had been added to it, but it was a great one-shot... I only wish for more so it could make me feel the way I do throughout the story... *sniffles* A masterful touch for Naruto's love for both Sakura and Sasuke, and a heartening twist for Sakura, and the bittersweet mix for Sasuke and his love-that-could-never-be for his teammates....
I can't think of any way else to put into words how much I adore this... *sniffles* Now I gotta go back and read it again cause I'm just in the mood for a great cry now... lol
I can't think of any way else to put into words how much I adore this... *sniffles* Now I gotta go back and read it again cause I'm just in the mood for a great cry now... lol