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for Silence Before Dawn

by CrazyToffee

schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one thing... you made me cry after reading the hottest lemon ever... not fair... not fair at all... me no likes you anymore!! T.T
person Shoko
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Here is a masterpiece; a was haunting and beautiful expression of the tragic destiny of Team 7. Though it be bleak, it is also marvelous, and I truly do think that in the end, Sasuke will be overcome by his love for them- both of them, as you have so vividly described.
person mikki
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was THE best naruto story i have ever read....i hope to read more stories from you in the future
turly,
M.loki
person Bryan
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read your oneshot, and I really liked it. I don't usually read these types of stories, but I figured that I might as well read it, and I'm glad that I did. It was really great and the use of MLK's quotes really made it good at the begginning and end, I look forward to reading more of your work!
person Kusachu
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I loves it. You are exceptional at angst. XD
person Kaii
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful piece. You put everyone in their right perspectives and their own insight. I loved the way you portrayed Sasuke. How he was so emotional and how he still had that air of 'Sasuke' to him. I love the way you planned this story out and the way you finished it. Overall, very well written, everything was just so touching and very moving. Thankyou for writing this.
person keebz
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was absolutely brilliant!!! :) Wonderful writing, I nearly cried!!!
person Duggan
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh...my...

That was utterly, completely and wonderfully beautiful. I...I can't even describe...wow...
person Ayare
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. I hope it happens in the actual story. It seemed very pausible to me. Oh god i wanna cry!
person Shiva
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute so orginal. The words of a very great and wise man that the word loved too! I look forward to more of your work.