rate_review Reviews

I love sasunarusaku stories...there aren't many complete, well written ones out there. I really wish things turned out better for these three in your story, since I'm against all tragic or angst endings, but I can appreciate how you delivered their emotions in this situation. I think the fact that it was a oneshot, made it easier for me to appreciate it even with the sad ending. Seriously! you know how bad it is to comprimise yourself to read 40 chapters of a story just to find out in the ending is terrible (as in tragic)!!! Instead of feeling emotionally cleansen for crying I feel emotionally drain and completely hesitant to read anything similar! haha but that comes neither here or there in this story. It was very well done, wrapped in a nice small package, and it gets two thumbs up from my corner!!!

Oh my, if that wasn't the epitome of bittersweet...
Beautifully written.

I'm utterly speechless! But I'm going to try to articulate what this fanfiction made me feel.
You did an extremely fantastic job staying true to the characters, in my humble opinion. And how you managed to weave so many themes; lust, desire, love, angst, regret, determination....I found myself almost with a tear in the eye when I got to the end. Of all the Team Seven pairings, this is perhaps only to be rivaled by Asuka-sama's Teamwork series. But even this story of yours stands in a class all of it's own.

Oh wow. That was really powerful.

Wow. That was very deep and emotional and just really great. Wonderful work you have done here. Great job!!
meadow

There aren't words right now....hands down one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read. There is so much I want to say about this, but I can't make my mind stop spinning with the thoughts brought on by your writing. The quotes were...perfect.

Excellent/outstanding/amazing/stupendous/awe-inspiring/etc job. Hope to see more from you in the future.

~fayyasha

so sad....but very well written!

Wow, that was so emotional and powerful. It was perfect. It was not what you wanted to happen but it was what needed to happen. That was an amazing piece. Great job

that was bitter sweet the way you wrote it was absolutely beautiful great great great job on this fic i look forward to see more team 7 fics

Oh my god....that was so wrong...but wrong in the way of I just can't really think of any other way to explain how sad it was...I'm all teary now. Major props....