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well i haven't seen this trio together and like always great job with this fic you are truly on of my favorite authors on this site i look forward to seeing more of your work

YOU HAVE TO DO MORE CHAPATERS FOR THIS BUT AS LONG AS YOU DON'T FORGET THE OTHERS AS WELL.

oh my oh me...he...you, i..it..oh dearie...definately different from your usual. But ya kno, i think it just proves that you hav the ability to write any genre you please, now thats talent. It was beautifully written, very angsty-ish? But im not gonna lie...i almost died choking on my spit everytime i read orochi-chans name...ew...yucky...however, you still managed to turn me on, no matter how repulsive that man is...i bet you had an effin field day writing about that tongue of his, shit, i would...ya kno, if i had yur talent. You chose an extremely difficult character to write and did a spectacular job writing it. None of the characters seemed ooc and you really put everything in the mood. Congratulations, it was a success, yu kno i love the male domination thing, its the smex...just, orochi-chan isnt the most appealing character to me, that is all. But yu write about whoever your little heart desires, cough cough, sasuke, cough...lol, update POT (haha, Party of three....haha)

PS: You should think about writing some more oneshots, you cant test out the chemistry between the characters and maybe try different ideas or genres, good luck

I'm actually glad you're not continuing it, because it's flawless as a hentai one-shot and making a longer story might take away from this fact. I like the way Sasuke took advantage of Sakura's weakness for him... what a bastard! I also like the fact that he was quite frank about how he'd kill her if he didn't have plans to use her. When it comes to smutworks I prefer yaoi to hentai, but this was too fun to pass up! It was like watching a hentai OVA *laughs* classic ending! I can see the credits cue right after the close up of the cursed seal!

One crit though... your lemons--albeit wonderfully perverlicious--are a bit repetitive. I read your Party of Three and it kinda felt like all you had to do was substitute Naruto for Orochimaru to get the same story. I like this fic better because it's a one shot.

Wow, pretty F-U-C-Ked. Thank God its only an anime

I thought it was great. Don't tell me this is a one shot. It was really good, and HOTTTTTTT!!!!

Wow. Oh boy. You're such a BAAAD Princess! The erotic encounters between Ochimaru and Sakura was admittedly unexpected but hotly well done! But the ending was DEFINITELY deliciously twisted – its just so Ochimaru! And to think that Sasuke played a MAJOR part in it. I do question why Ochimaru would do this to Sakura when he already has Sasuke? Anywhoo, I hope you’ll continue with this!

"One-shot" -- oh. Um, nevermind my last remark. But its still good! It had that "Rosemary's Baby" feel to it.

i loved it...and i hope you post new chapters soon.

O_O wow.... I never looked at something so intense yet so good... I swear I was on the edge of my chair... BRILLIANT any pairing with Sakura made by u is BRILLIANT! LUVED IT!