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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy sshhhiiiit! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I like how you keep changing the POV from person to person! I always thought that the rookie 9 and Gai's team should revolt or something like that! What happened to the Godaime and where the hell is Konohamaru? You better have not killed him off! Pretty please update soon!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Will it ever be continued.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi there
just wanted to tell what a fantastic fic this is. I first read it on TONFA thinking "WOW...that is just really cool!!" I've never really seen a storyline like this so it's really refreshing to actually see a story that has truly got something very worthwhile and captivating. I truly hope you continue this fic because it really is very very good. Sasuke's evilish/possessive character rocks!! Better than many others I have see lol ^-^!!
just wanted to tell what a fantastic fic this is. I first read it on TONFA thinking "WOW...that is just really cool!!" I've never really seen a storyline like this so it's really refreshing to actually see a story that has truly got something very worthwhile and captivating. I truly hope you continue this fic because it really is very very good. Sasuke's evilish/possessive character rocks!! Better than many others I have see lol ^-^!!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! So sad though that Iruka died. I can't wait to find out what things Naruto has had to endure because of the new hokage.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TT_TT Poor Kakashi~
He's lost just as many important people in his life as Naruto.....
Don't worry Kaka-san! It'll get better
O_O Oh, and i'm loving the story so far, excellent writing, keep it up!
He's lost just as many important people in his life as Naruto.....
Don't worry Kaka-san! It'll get better
O_O Oh, and i'm loving the story so far, excellent writing, keep it up!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Abyssmyancestor, my eyes were so WATERY!!! That's like the frst time any other story apart from this other story called "Living a Lie" BY:Dhampir (EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS STORY!!!If you've read it already...THEN READ IT AGAIN!!) You didn't make me cry...but that's the first time since that story (living a lie) that any other story made me come CLOSE...CRAP YOU MADE ME START CRYING!! *goes to blow her nose and wipe her tears*
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still loving your story and since the next chapter is about sakura please tell me she is going to get whored (may all people who are mean to naruto die). no questions just impatient for the update.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naruto wants sasuke right? so why is he so mad cause of the kiss?
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NNUUUUU! IRUKA! Holy crap! This is the first fic i have read where he dies! Im not really sure what to think...Great chapter though, nicely written. I LOVE the plot, its great! And there is just so many dynamics to the Sasunaru relationship in here that im not to sure what to think of that either. Like, is Naruto gonna be totaly submisive? Is Sasuke gonna be a bastard who only whants Naruto in theory but not for love? Gr, is Naruto gonna allow himself to be pushed around and then when he finaly breaks, is Sasuke gonna not rreaallyy say sorry, and th issue will be dissmissed? GAH! SO MANY WAYS TO GO WITH THIS! I LOVE IT! ITS CCRRAAZZYYY! Geez, im sorry if im rambling. You are doing an amazing job, please please continue! I LOVE IT!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The SasuNaru bit was BEAUTIFUL! Very well done! I adore how it left so many questions on the extent of the Seme/Uke relationship. I know Naruto Uke but its fun to guess about HOW uke he is gonna be and how loving towards Naruto Sasuke will be. Thats the biggest question for me. i dunno why, im strange. Anyways, great fic! Longer chapters perhapps though? Just cause I wanna read LOTS of this fic hehe.