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Gosh my tears almost fell... Its so sad to lose Iruka.. Very passionate.. I love it..

wow.. this is a very unique story line... I am very excited! i hope Naruto will play a big part too! Updtae soon please?

Things for the warning, it was so sad. I almost cried...okay...i did cry...so sad. Poor Iruka, poor Kakashi, poor Naruto. It's still a good story. I look forward to your next update.

I love the way Hinata and Neji turned out... very nice nyan... The atmosphere you created was really effective, dark and mysterious... at least that's what it seemed like...ne? I approve... so please update as soon as you can and you will be having a happy kitten on your hands... *purrs*

Oh, btw... there are a few problems with the spelling... 'they’re home' when it should be 'their home', 'straitened' for 'straightened' and a lost word... 'My bottom trembled,' I think there should go 'My bottom lip trembled' right? Um, the rest was beautifully rendered... I really like this story... so please dont be offended by my words, ne?

Gods... you are really good... You broke my heart into little pieces.... Iruka dead? Ambushed by the Hokage's men? I want that asshole dead, you hear? Dead! How could he... poor Iruka... poor Kakashi and poor, poor Naruto... Man, you really got me where it hurts and I take off my hat to you... really. Now please... promise me one thing....
You will kill that bastard in the most painfully way possible... yes, my usually pacific side is screaming for blood, so please... dont be quick when you off him, ne? Pretty please? *bribes with cookies* And yes, keep up the good work. *goes to find tissue paper for her stuffed nose.* Bye!

AWWWW that was sad. Nice job!! This is really tugs at the 'ol heart strings.

that's sweet that you a writing this for your friend sometimes being allowed to get your mind off your troubles helps out more than you know. i hope everything will eventually fall into place for them and maybe your blazing story will help. can't wait for your next update.

Ohh, me likey lots, keep going :3. I want to know what happens next, pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!

So far so good, I’m glad Sasuke has grown-up a little bit but still has his bastard/possessive attitude that we all know & love…
I am looking forward to more
& Please explain what happened to Iruka & the Fifth Hokage

Thank you

You really captured my intrest in this. I don't believe I have ever read a story with a plot like this befor in this fandom. I can't wait to read future chapters!