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for Trigger

by Abyssmyancestor

person lo
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that first installment. Nice job.
person lo
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. Don't be whiney about reviews, I 'll loose respect for you. But, Nice jobIU like this story so far.
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neesan means sister. Niisan is brother.

Anyway...

I like this story! It's very interesting and new.
person wendyghost
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was nice of you to dedicated this story to her. Yes, she is an excellent writer and perhaphs after the pain of losing someone so close to her does not hurt her as much but instead she remebers her with love. That pain does not go away but the support of family and friends help to ease it. Good story by the way.
person wendyghost
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for what they did to naruto konoha deserves to burn! good chapter
person wendyghost
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a truly interesting story. i haven't read a story like this in a long time. i hope u are inspired to write more cause i'm sure inspired to read more.
person Kerushi
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I good SasuNaru! With an original idea no less, and a Hot!Evil!Sasuke. And a cute woobie Naruto. Awwww. Looking forward to future developments!
person eien no ren
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first of all, thanks for writing this for her... The only author I can think of that lost her mother was one of my favorites too... I really do hope she finds consolation for her grief soon, even if she doesnt write again.
second, I love this story. Its so vivid and nostalgic, you can almost smell the dust that settled over Uchiha manor. Thank you! I am very impressed... write more?
person eien no ren
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love, I love, I love, I love, I love... did I say I love it?
Please dont slack... This is getting me emotionally involved... hint: Only my favorite stories and authors get one review per each written chapter...nyah... I am doing the same with your story 'cause I love it and feel there's so much to be said to continue reading.
Yes, I ADORE your Sasuke bastard... and your Naruto Dobe... nyah, they have such great chemistry I am looking forward to the rest... so please... write more?
person lo
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has great potential. I can't wait to see more.